I read this the other day and haven't been able to get it out of my head. You capture Seiji especially so perfectly here, and the way they...FENCE...with their words and emotions is so lovely. It's so nice to see a well-written Seiji/Nasuti story, since they're so rare (which makes no sense because it is canon). SO nice to see someone who supports CANON! I thank you. :)

OMG!!

Ok, so I am going through my whole romance-fic-reading-shipping-Mia-and-Sage-stage and This is just absolutely LOVE IT!!

I love your characterizations of them both! How Mia is strong, witty, and opening honest as Sage is cool and composed. I loved the fact that he was jealous of the other man while at the same time Mia out rightly told him that she wanted to be claimed, that she belonged to HIM! No one else!

Such open honesty is just amazing and beautiful to read!
Loved that!

This just amazingly cute Boggy!

Now I want to go and work on my own ficcie of them ^^

This was pobably the most unexpected Seiji and Nasueti based story I've read in a long time. Bravo! The dialogue was spot-on for the characters and I loved the description.

Very nice story. I loved the usage of words to describe the moment Sage and Mia were in and the blunt direction of their words, they didn't beat around the bush or anything. Very enjoyable story overall.

Sakura123

Brilliant! After reading much garbage and plotless stories from other sights, I must say that it was a surprise and nice little treat to read your story. Please write more!

Oh! i cant wait to see what seiji says!

Bea-u-ti-ful. I am very impressed. now to go an' read your other fics. ^_^

...The plot thickens!...please keep writing...

HHUUMM I like it. Hope there's more. update if thre's more.

Was it tangible, or the musings of a fantasy-indulged woman heightened by beauty, rebellion, and—dare she say—scandal?

Scandal? Oh Nasuti, we love you when you're involved in any scandal including that beautifully jealous Seiji Date.

And Boggy, I'm loving the style, especially the one line paragraphs, it just makes the entire story work. Work in what way, I've yet to figure out, but I do love it...

And since I just realized that I completely over-looked your A/N's, I am now completely especially giddy that "Yay, another S&N author comes to play!"

So I expect more from you and shall give you a fangirly "UPDATE SOONZ PLEEZ!" ;)

As usual, amazing. Your Seiji takes my breath away. I'm not sure about Nasuti's little monologue. I don't think Nasuti would like to think of herself as a possession.

On the other hand, I'm so used to trusting you for in-character interaction. You write so well and so in-character that I'm WANTING to accept it, but I don't like thinking of her thinking of herself that way.

Eh, I'm torn. I DO like the fic. It's that one line that bothers me.

Nice. (hint:writemorelikethis:hint)