Thanks for clarifying the time period. You should know, however, that Felicity's parents were already divorced at that time. They split up in season 2. Regardless, I look forward to reading more.

Pretty good, but I'm still confused about the time period. Can you give us a general idea of when this is occurring? Season 2??

This is off to an interesting start. Keep it up. But can you please give us a hint as to when this is taking place? Is it season 2?

Interesting. I do have some suggestions for you. First, you need to clarify what time period this story is taking place in, and second, you should use spell check. Oh, and all the writing is one side of the page. That is kind of odd. I do hope you'll write more, though, because I love any and all FAB fan fictions.

sounds like this will be a cool FAB story