 purrfus 2009-10-05 . chapter 10Intriguing. Blaise's poit of view and history are fascinating. |
 Kara Metallium 2009-09-13 . chapter 10Considering this story hasn't been updated for nearly two years, I was wondering if perhaps you could put a note about it in your author's profile since you don't want to put this as an author's note within the story. Also, the link to your livejournal doesn't work. Thanks. |
 Draconis Argenteum 2009-09-13 . chapter 10I realize that's it's been approximately two years since your last update, but I feel the need to express my hope that you will find your muse again and publish another chapter because I really like where I think this is going and really want to read more.
I realize that taking DH into account might be a challenge, but I doubt any reader would really object to deviating from canon because not all readers necessarily liked the turns the seventh book took.
Basically, I think that the story is beautifully written and that the characterization is well done and kees with canon so well that even when certain events are altered, it just seems a natural progression. JKR was writing a children's book and those of us who grew up on it are nor necessarily children anymore. Your writing gives the characters a more realistic feel while keeping true to JKR's writing, and I wish there were more. Please update. |
 Paddie W 2009-09-04 . chapter 10 I really love this story. The way you weave the Half-Blood Prince through your book is like seeing the big picture for the first time. I really want to know how you would complete this and DH. What happens with the Umbra Code? You have many fans out here hoping for more. Thank you |
 bubblybabs 2009-08-20 . chapter 10Am intrigued with this story so far... |
 mak5258 2009-07-23 . chapter 10this is an excellent story!! i hope you plan to update soon; you've got all the characters pegged so well and the plot is really thickening, here :) |
 ForFlamesInFlames 2009-07-19 . chapter 10I very rarley review storys now days. I supose it has to do with the fact that there is so few storys that impress me. This one does. I'm not going to begg you to update but there would be a pity if this wonderful story didn't reach an end. I realy, realy, like this. Your style, your language. Wonderful wotk! |
 SkySeven 2009-07-05 . chapter 10This is so full of awesome!! It would be even more awesome if you would continue this story! |
 Desert Illusion 2009-05-14 . chapter 10 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!! I don't care which book you use...just UPDATE! This is an AMAZING STORY, and i LOVE the plot!
UPDATE!!
~Illusion |
 Tara Ash 2009-04-12 . chapter 10I was just browsing the favorites of an author when I found this story. I love it! I was so caught up I did that thing where I go to click the arrow to the next chapter seven times before realizing -- horror of horrors -- there ISN'T a next chapter! And then I realize how long it's been since it was updated. PLEASE don't abandon it -- I'll be reduced to writing fanfic for the fanfic just so it can have an ending :)
Love, love, love the story, great work and please update soon, or put it on hiatus officially (if you must, pesky real life does intrude!) |
 MillieJoan 2009-04-03 . chapter 10PLEASE finish--this is honestly the best depiction of Snape I've ever come across. He's both his canon self and more real than JKR allowed him to be. This is wonderful. |
 Kamarati 2009-01-04 . chapter 1PLEASE finish this story it's great |
 theflickofpen 2008-12-30 . chapter 10kwl i love this story, please update son |
 Golum 2008-12-05 . chapter 10Very good. Please finish it! |
 missevilprincess 2008-11-03 . chapter 10Dude, I'm in love with this story. x.x
Is the spider thing Rita Skeeter? Oh wait. Forget I said that, Rita is a beetle. :D
I'm still in love.
I love that analogy with Snape, and the wards and stuff that you wrote a couple of chapters ago.
I don't love how this story was last updated a year ago. If that could be changed, I would not mind. :P
Ever optimistic and hopeful, update soon? :) |