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| Anna 2006-04-20 ch 10, anon. | abuseYou are a great writer. Love how you put the greatness of Prue into word. /Anna |
| TVCrazed 2006-04-17 ch 10, | abuseWOW. I LOVED ALL OF UR STORIES. KEEP IT UP. I HOPE TO SEE MORE SOON. |
| Peanut2lb 2005-12-02 ch 10, anon. | abuseI can't beleive that Prue is gone. Lilliana is just like Piper in Charmed Again by not wanting to go to the funeral. Excellent ending. |
| Peanut2lb 2005-12-02 ch 9, anon. | abuseokay, this review is really late I'd admit. I really just don't spend that much time online anymore. I really hope you don't give up writing. Anyhow, I really like how Brianna shared her feelings for Prue and the family in this chapter. |
| shannenfan from holland 2005-11-24 ch 10, anon. | abusewhoa! it is a great great story you have written here! so sad but so... prue u can really see her caracter in it the strong woman who took care of everything and everyone! whoa it was really nice to read! hope you didn't stop completely from writing because u are very very good at it! take care! lots of loves, hugs and kisses a fan ;) |
| Manic-Cheese-Fairy 2005-10-09 ch 10, | abuseok it was very hard to rea ever heard of paragraphs? |
| Erica 2005-10-04 ch 10, anon. | abuseHey..im sorry i havnt reviewed all along..but i really love ur stories i think they r fantastic! dont quit writting tho bc ur amazing!! i read the other story too and this is such a great sequel u really pulled off teh age difference in everyone, ur a GREAT writer so dont quit just cause u didnt get too many reviews..bc u never kno how many ppl dont have time to review but read ur stuff nayways..like mE! :-) im sorry i didnt review u earlier..please keep writing i luv your stuff! u can email me if u want thnx erica |
| shanfan 2005-10-03 ch 10, anon. | abusedo not give up doing something that you love. |
| Manic-Cheese-Fairy 2005-10-02 ch 9, | abuseaw i think that was really sweet maybe this could include a bit more magic and that Phoebe and Piper could still have a bit of their old personality? |
| Manic-Cheese-Fairy 2005-10-02 ch 1, | abuseomg i think that Mike is like no ok maybe Kyle could come into it? and Paige is better with the kids? |
| peanut2lb 2005-09-30 ch 8, | abuseI really like the teenager coming out in Meghan in this chapter. You did a great job, very realistic. I hope she'll be able to patch things up wtih Andy though. |
| peanut2lb 2005-09-30 ch 7, | abuseOh sweet chapter, I'm glad it looks like Lilly is going to be okay! |
| peanut2lb 2005-09-30 ch 6, | abuseOh Poor Lilly! I hope she will be okay. I have to admit, I laughed all the way through the conversation with Prue and Andy in the shower. That was a great "Mom and Dad" talk that no father wants have...lol to Andy saying he was having a heart attack!! |
| peanut2lb 2005-09-30 ch 5, | abuseFor whatever reason, ffn wouldn'tlet me review chp 4. So here it is: What a great character Lilly is!1 I want to know more about her. Chp5: Make up too cute, their little girl is growing up! |
| peanut2lb 2005-09-30 ch 3, | abuseOh Poor Phoebe. I like the from Pheebs, to Phreebee. You're right they never call her that anymore. I think it was mainly a Prue thing. So sad that she lost a child!! |