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InoXShikamaru4ever
2008-07-16
ch 3,
abuseI LUV it!
retro rockstar
2008-06-10
ch 5, anon.
abusenice one not really what i was expecting must admit that i to thought kira would introduce them
retro rockstar
2008-06-10
ch 4, anon.
abusehey that was great...though i really want them to meet already (smiles)
retro rockstar
2008-06-10
ch 1,
abusethat was very cool, random and funnt gotta say me and my cuz love your stories...
flipped
2008-02-03
ch 4,
abuseoh my god! i adore this chapter so much!
shiloah18
2007-09-13
ch 16,
abusewoOhOo! eggs with ketchup! yum! *Licks her Lips* yay for catsup! xure hope my taste doesn't sound weird.. lol XD

*faLLs over Laughing* HA! HA! HA! it's hiLarious imagining KxL over the phone.. Kira choking whiLe Lacus frets her head oFf teLLing him to find someone to pat his back.. and Kira having his face at the monitor as if he wanted to get warped into it and be transfered to where Lacus was crying out “Breathe Lacus! Breathe!” *rofL* it's just priceLesS having those characters worried faces.. XD

poison? *bangs her hand to the fLOor, stiLL Laughing* oh man Athrun.. XD

Lacus was right.. about the serendipity.. ^^

MEer with her normaL hair coLour demo, Lacus' appearance, ne? hmm.. *has stopped Laughing and is now back on her chair thinking of what Lacus wouLd LoOk Like if her hair was bLack* yeah.. something to think about..

"He sat there, fiddLing with his cutLery a bit Longer before standing up abruptLy. He then took his coat, said a quick goodbye to Meer and Left hurriedLy."

"After MEer had Left, Athrun soon foLLowed, opting for the Long way home in hopes that he might stiLL be abLe to run into CagaLLi."

I don't get it.. Athrun said that MEer was the one who waLked out on him demo, it says here in this same chap, chap 13, that he was the one who waLked out on her.. confusing reaLLY.. @_@

lol for a second there I thought he reaLLy foLLowed the guy since Cags toLd him about the guy and how things LoOked Like just how they met.. *shrugs*

"But... mattered in the same way she does to him? UnLesS she mattered in a way, that she thought was the way that he mattered... or he mattered in a way that she thought she matters..." lol those were a Lot of "matter".. *giggLes* XD

baka Kira.. and they thought Athrun was turning gay.. >.<

siLLy Kira.. he was tempted to jump on the roOf of the cab to save time? lol XD

The White Symphony.. ^_^

"Written on the bottom Line, very neatLy and pLainLy were seven words:"

"To see CagaLLi, at Least once a day."

*starts to count the words* one, two, thrEe, *pauses* four, five, six, *pauses again* seven, eight.. hey! those were eight words! not seven! *pouts* demo, if you changed the "at Least" into "atLeast" then it wouLd be aight.. :)

*snickers* hmm.. seems Like both bestfriends, Kira and Athrun, have the same thing in mind.. spending their time with the "significant others".. ;)

nyWeiZ, I wouLdn't be reading this fic if it weren't for the one, CagalliT, who pLagiarised your work.. she apoLogized at her A/N and mentioned this fic.. if I'm not mistaken.. from waiting on you to waiting for you.. oh weLL.. *shrugs* this was kakoii! XD

btw, have this fic marked COMPLETE.. and "The Dinner" and "The Brightest Rose" tOo.. those are oneshots, ne? c",)

jaa ne! I'LL be reading "bLush and smiLe" in the meantime whiLe waiting for you to update on "Neighbors", "To PLuck an Honest Rose" and "MatchmeddLing".. (",)
simply -v-
2007-08-08
ch 15,
abusewow, that surely was a roller coaster haha. you made your obstacles so kinda and understand and not plain evil like most other authors do with their fics. AND you're one of the few who didnt use the over used the 'overprotective brother kira', which i personally do not like. i love how you had kira approve of their free love and not pry etc etc.

superb story, just as expected from you. thank you so much for this magnificent read :)
simply -v-
2007-08-07
ch 5,
abuserofl, NICE!
simply -v-
2007-08-07
ch 4,
abuseAW :( thats was wonderfully written!
simply -v-
2007-08-07
ch 3,
abuserofl, attack of the blonde princess XD
simply -v-
2007-08-07
ch 1,
abuseXD ahh good old cagalli, always unpredictable :).

loved it :)
puloysky
2007-05-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat must've been one of those Astray girls..
AyumiHoshi
2007-01-07
ch 16,
abuseOh man! The best AxC fanfic i've read EVER!
Angela
2006-11-11
ch 4, anon.
abuseI'm a bit confused. Athrun knows Cagalli's name because she told him at the beginning at the story. So...
Amber
2006-11-04
ch 2, anon.
abuseso your name's koali alolao,...
:) asian huh? which land? I'm from India.
Well update the other ifc's sooner pleas I'm burning from curiousity and my eng sux I know :( sigh what does OOC mean?
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