Work a little on grammar, but in all, that was so very sweet and comforting :) Touching though short :3

Awesome Kumi/Yuri is so cute. Nice work!

It's cute, I love Kumi/Yuri and it's hard ton find, thank you !

Not bad fan fic. It's emotive and beautifull (Kumi x Yuri is always baeutifull ^O^).

Technichally, very correct... let's see more of your stories...

Jeshua_Morbus

Hey man I love it. Im a big alien nine fan and this is a very good fanfic.

it was a great story keep it up!

Hey, nice story! I printed it and read it at school today and i was all 'aw' in the middle of class. I havent read the Alien 9 manga yet though, only seen the anime. But I knew about Kumi's merging with her borg. I'm glad someone finally wrote a a Alien 9 fic and I'd been dying to read urs for sometime. Thanks for the nice story, i hope to see more from you soon! I'll be posting mine soon too.

~DepressedDreamer~

That was pretty good, even though I don't know the characters like you. Do many people read your stories? Well, by! Right some more soon, please!

wow...that was so...wow...i liked the setting and the dicription you put into it, that was really good, keep it up!!

Caoi =^.^=
Kitty-cat

Wow, really well written! Too bad there isn't a lot of alien 9 fics..I've been waiting for a while to see a fanfiction fandom for this anime! Anyway, I like it!

Wow, this was really well written you did a great job!
It's a shame there aren't a many alien 9 fics out there, it's a great little anime to watch :D
Anyway I really enjoyed this, your style is very good and easy to read. :D
And on a last note, you may want to say that your fic has spoilers in it.
Everything else is great, write more!

this is moving, you have to write more.
(I've put it in my "select" favorites)
(I have hundreds of favorites,but only 9 select)

It was a very good first chapter. Please Update soon.

I've only ever seen there HAIR turn into the tentacles before, they do NOT come out of there arms.
beyond that...ABSOLUTE GENIUS
MAKE A SEQUAL, I CAMMAND IT!