LOL at that last author note. I like the story too, though. You really kept me wondering what the heck was going on! heh. I can just picture Leo's heartbroken face as he mutters the awful words...

Very unexpected ending. Quite cute!

I loved being surprised by a story, and this one fulfilled that element wonderfully. I was thinking one way and it turned out to be something completely different. Great job!

Wonderful "outside the box" writing from you! You're right, I was expecting your usual bombing, shooting, or sex scene - and shame on me for that. This was a great little story. Very entertaining, lovely surprise ending, and *totally* on the mark with Jed and Leo. Excellent.

Great suspense! You had me thinking all kinds of dire thoughts about Jed and Leo. Wonderful, playful resolution! I love your work. Congratulations and thank you.

This was a spectacular story! You have a way with words that really bring the characters to life.

Amber

haha, excellent