both chapters were equally amazing but i deffinatley think you should finish it ... !

This tome is equaled in the eyes of mine to the great fathers of fantasy, Tolkein and Lewis. YOur story is provacative and sexual in ways that make me tingle and tremble all over.

WRITE MORE

I can't believe how sacred and loving and proper you made a intercouse extending from one more than the appropriate coupling.

This tome is equaled in the eyes of mine to the great fathers of fantasy, Tolkein and Lewis. YOur story is provacative and sexual in ways that make me tingle and tremble all over.

WRITE MORE

I can't believe how sacred and loving and proper you made a intercouse extending from one more than the appropriate coupling.

Nice RL/SB/JP fic. lol 3some. Keep up the good work

Ooh, what's the secret? Tell me! Keep writing, and be quick about it.

WRITE MORE...its really good even if they aregay i luv them and ur a really good writer 2

you write very sexually provacative stories, do you yourself have some unexpressed sexual desires .. i think you do maybe we can act this out sometime cant wait to read more

this story is so good. i hope you do more its way too short =(

the sexual tension is AMAZING.