I love this story and can't believe I missed it in the first place.

Great Job!

SE

What a lovely and poignant story ejb. I loved each and every word of it. Well done.

Yours

mcj

This was a wonderful story. It puts into perspective for me about being able to sleep through the night time thunderstorms, and I'm 30 years old. Nicely done; I hope you do more like this.

An evocative story. I like the way you managed to tell us of Jeff's life through the theme of the thunder.

Excellent, absolutely excellent.

The re-occuring theme of the storm, seeing how it had affected Jeff throughout his life was wonderfully portrayed. And how you encorporated the thunder of the jets and Jeff's fathers words, was very well done. I also enjoyed the fact that it was Gordon, who was afraid of the storms.

Certainly food for thought regarding where the name 'Thunderbirds' actually originated.

Thoroughly enjoyed this! It was wonderful. Well done.

Kim

This is just beautiful. I could almost smell the rain - you've created some lovely images and emotions. I was even getting a little misty toward the end, but it was done with a smile. This is a very heart-warming story :)

Very nice. I love the theme of Thunder being part of 'your life and mine' running throughout. Maybe the name 'Thunderbirds' wasn't so random! Excellent story. Well written and well thought out.