Great story. Pretty much exactly what I was looking for. But maybe you should consider using spell check in the future? And prolly a peer editor as well for things like missed words or the wrong use of a word.

You need an editor. There were so many typos that I almost exploded. Good story, but the bad spelling and grammar (not to mention the left-out words and those spelled backwards) made it really hard to follow.

I LOVED IT!

I really enjoed reading this story.

It's a really sweet story

This story is adorable! :)