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   Katraine 9/15/05 . chapter 1Very nice! Keep up the good work! One question though, how come Sasuke recognizes Sakura and Sakura doesn't recognize Sasuke? |
| PUNK13 9/15/05 . chapter 1 Sorry I "yelled" at you, i didn't know you just wrote it. I have one question for you. Does Naruto still like Sakura? KEEP WRITING! |
| PUNX13 9/15/05 . chapter 1 I LOVED IT! why didn't u write more? I am angry at you. write more! |
| rinkurocks 9/15/05 . chapter 1 Extremely impressive! This is so very realistic and in short, absolutely awesome. I hope you will continue as soon as possible. |
| The Ryuu Victoire Tea Party 9/15/05 . chapter 1 mhuahahahahahahaha! |
| Kurenai no Chinoumi 9/15/05 . chapter 1 O! Update please. It's really good so far. I loved it! :D |
| MiseRIP 9/15/05 . chapter 1 You've got a good start to the story, and the ending makes me want to read more. The only thing was, when the ninja was attacking Sakura's family, I don't think Sakura would let her father stand in front of her. She has a habbit of jumping in front of people at the last moment. If she was almost a jounin, I think she would have been able to recognise that he wasn't that good and that she was able to stop him. It sort of seemed like you wanted to get the death of her parents over and done with quickly so you could move to the next part. Other than that scene I really like the story and I'm also pleased that you've kept the characters IC and changed them how they'd *really* change in certain situations. Oh, longest comment I've ever written. Better stop now, then. XD I look forward to the next chapter! |
| Yachtzee 9/15/05 . chapter 1 Nice job on this fiction. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Very descriptive, and the pace is nicely done. A thouroughly enjoyable story. |
| KaitouKudou 9/15/05 . chapter 1 Hey, this isn't bad at all. Can't wait to see next chapter. PS: Check out my fic too |
| Apple-Mei-Mei 9/15/05 . chapter 1 You describe the scenery and the characters thoughts well, it is nicely planned and i LOVE IT! Totally...this is gonna be a BIG hit, if it isn't then i lied and i give you persmissoin to kill me! _"! really, i love this so much, a lot of fics are the "sasuke comes back from orochimaru sakura has changed" i guess this is like them? But you have made it stood out, and the summary really got me! lol I hope you update soon as in now! ja ne!(o'-'o) (p.s great fic, u have my full support! Gan Batte!) |
| Shinobi Darkbeak 9/15/05 . chapter 1 hi sounds interesting sof far keep up the good work _ |
| hyesung79 9/15/05 . chapter 1 oh wow thats a great story ha! i got to comment first! yay! aniways update soon! |
| Fiana 9/15/05 . chapter 1 OMG! I want to read the next chapter! Update soon! Plz! XD |
