love it

This was really good!! Very good writing.
Bit sad about the ending, but I guess that is not your fault but J K Rowling's :(

This story was great. I really enjoyed it at least. The ending was sad, but not depressingly so. At first I thought they were still engaged but found it adorable the way you skipped ahead.
-ashley

I like it so far, but it confused me when you went from calling Victoria Victoria to Julia and then back again. Maybe go back and fix it, or clear up the confusion by having a Julia in the room that's mentioned.

I must say that the ending has to be the best ending I have ever read. Ever. It made me laugh, even though it really shouldnt've.
But I did really like the story. I think you really captured the characters well, and the dream twist was really interesting.

I love it. It's good.

Lovely

I was almost scared before I read the last chapter because I thought...
Well, it's just that this whole story was basically centered around dreams. And when I saw that the last chapter was called Rude Awakening, I thought that maybe you were going to make the whole thing a dream. And that you've basically been hinting that the entire time by naming the story that.

What a scary thought.
But no, it all worked out wonderfully.
Loved it :)

Oh My God, he's SUCH an idiot. but absinance CAN be hilarious!

I love it~

Wow. Steamy. lol

nice chapter :D

oh lily you and your dreams tsk tsk
i wonder what mr potter would think when he finds out of such dreams

For dreams (more correctly classified as nightmares) that have your childhood phobia walk in on you whilst bathing, turn to page 498. If these dreams include the Sand Man marrying the Boogey Man and reproducing bright orange demon children, see your local hospital or asylum.
- that had to be my favourite line in the entire chapter :d that was so hilarious i fell off my bed laughing :D
nice work with the chapter :D

nice introduction
ahahahh that was one interesting dream that our lovely miss evans was having in Mc Gees class hheheheh
nice work :D *continues to read*

aw the end is sad but AMAZING lol. i loved it ALL!11