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Toxic Irresistibility
2009-11-23 . chapter 22
I really like your AU of HP & the Philosopher's Stone. Very well crafted. I really enjoyed it. :) Now I'm off to read the sequel!
lol
2009-11-16 . chapter 1
i like the story a lot, good work so far!!
storyprincess92
2009-11-09 . chapter 22
add me ur so cool and smart and funny
WitchVela
2009-10-31 . chapter 22
snape is a TOTAL git. i can't stand him. i hated it that he forced veritaserum on harry. though the end with harry winning a small battle was nice.
WitchVela
2009-10-31 . chapter 21
ah, i have a theorie now. so connor isn't the real boy-who-lived, but has a life debt to harry. i keep looking forward to the next chapter and story.
WitchVela
2009-10-31 . chapter 20
connor is just stupid. i really don't like him so far. and i am glad that for once harry let's himself be angry with his twin.
WitchVela
2009-10-31 . chapter 19
connor is - in his innocence - totally biased. and in this chapter harry finally sees it a little bit, because it concerns him directly. hopefully he'll soon recognize that by staying silent when connor is prejudiced, he only encourages his brother to become it even more.
WitchVela
2009-10-31 . chapter 16
i kind of like draco's mother in here - for now (i don't know what will happen with her, so i'll wait for an ultimate decision).
WitchVela
2009-10-31 . chapter 15
draco is just cute.
WitchVela
2009-10-31 . chapter 14
poor draco. finally someone opened his eyes to the reality. it is kind of sad to see draco starting to lose his innocence - though it will be for the best.
WitchVela
2009-10-31 . chapter 13
ugh, i just can't stand snape in here. i like it that he wants to show everybody that harry is powerful and i like his dream of a slytherin hero BUT he only wants that for his own personal vendetta against the potters, and THAT fact just ** me off. if his motivation was purely for the benefit of harry, i wouldn't be so aggravated every time i read about him. (and he is one of my favorite characters in the hp-universe, but in here right now i can't stand him). well written. good character-portrayals.
WitchVela
2009-10-31 . chapter 12
i like this story so far and had to stop by this chapter to comment. draco's letters are totally funny. you portray him very well. good work.
simplicity401
2009-10-31 . chapter 12
I absolutely adore the way Draco signs his letters. It makes me smile. :)
Rook
2009-10-20 . chapter 22
Simply amazing. I have read other Slytherin!Harry stories, but far too often they merely rephrase the original text and shove a still very Gryffindor Harry among the snakes. I love that there was plenty of new material, and, also, that the original plot had a twist to it to keep it fresh. My favorite part had to be the Christmas at Malfoy Manor and the play of Pureblood traditions that it entailed.

I will admit, Harry's control and maturity bugged me. I know that it could be considered plausible when I consider the upbringing he had, but I would have like to see him struggle more against the harder tasks he came across (i.e. The Lestranges and Voldemort). He remained unflappable and mostly unscathed through both encounters, and it felt jarring to me.
Rose Everett
2009-10-20 . chapter 22
I read your whole story without fail or hesitation or anything like reviewing every chapter that would have slowed me down. I plowed through and through every chapter, on the edge to see what might happen next in the story. I must say that I am deeply impressed by your vast creativity and knowledge to use those creative skills you have. I was also not disappointed, noticing that you have written this story about four years ago. I'm still extremely glad to come across this story and I look forward reading the sequel right after I submit this review.
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