The Potions by Snape
Wow, I'm first time to read the talk of Snape's first lesson in english.
That's so lured.
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Harry want make more and more mistakes, when Snape staring on Connor in the Potions?

Oh no...
There's lots of difficult words in this chapter. I tried to understand the sentence, but I couldn't sure that is it correct or not. I hadn't any dictionary in my hands at that time.X(

How interesting is it!
I hadn't get a interest in any english story before I read this book, because English isn't my mother language and my english isn't great yet.
That is so difficult to read a chapter, you know？However,I do it and I'm ready to read all of this series now :-D

This is very well done. I absolutely love the characters, the story line is fantastic, and I can't wait to start the next segment in the series!

I know I am incredibly late on this, but in my defence, I only started reading English fanfiction 2 years ago - after my Potter phase.
I am only on chapter 3 but my heart already aches for Harry. I mean - Lily, really? God, there will be so much more but I am already weirdly okay with the changes you made and I also really like your style. Seven books to go! See you in the end!

(but still, emotional manipulation of your child is - no)

Please excuse any swearing that I use, I need to rant.

Urg! I fucking despise Connor! He so idiotically naive and self-adoring (like James) but he's not even FUNNY about it. He just like "Oh, I'm so amazing and my brother Harry is good too but he'll never be at MY level, because I'm obviously something to be worshipped and my brother is fucking SUB-PAR."
For a minute there, I thought you were only have stupid-and-naive CONNOR on the Gryffindor quidditch team, but you didn't which I am EXTREMELY happy about, and I can't wait to see the look on Potter's face when he LOSES!

It is so frustrating to see Harry under these circumstances. I don't think this is fair to him at all. He is barely a teenager. No child, much less so young of an age, should be burdened by their own family, for goodness' sake! What is wrong with Lily and James? So they will sacrifice one of their children because they have two? It is outright disgusting and unforgivable. I can see a scenario for Harry that because Harry was trained to use such an amount of magic at such a young age and forced to mature in an unyielding speed, his propensity to magic is greater than that of anyone out there. Take that Order of Phoenix, so much for your grand prophesy and trying to use a baby to do your dirty work, huh?

That's our rightly infatuated Draco for us (adorably, so)! Thank you so much for this chapter. This was a refreshing change from Harry's ill besotted fate.

Oh, our beloved Harry! We love you to death but you work yourselves to death, too much! Hopefully next chapter will clear up some of my questions...

It's really sad that a mother would willingly raise hEr own child that way. I don't see any difference between her action and that of child abuse. With that being said, I love cunning, capable, insightful Harry!

Great chapter! I appreciate your English skill (this is not sarcasm). I mean, I really like reading a story without grammatical error and plethora of misspelled words... Kudos to you and your beta(?), really, :)

I do think there's a meaning behind the two scars. This story is getting more and more entriguing. I can't wait to read all of it!

Your story is so interesting! I'm loving it so far! Although I do kind of dislike Lily's attitude, I hope this could fit into some kind of a grand scheme in the end.

rereading. So wonderful. The best fanfiction out there. It's like a drug. Scary, really.

oh this story is great really funny i'm so looking forwards to reading the next bit