Reviews for The Wrath of AngelFace

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Renthead07 2006-08-29 ch 8,	abuseJust a thought, but did you intentionally put that it took 13 days (September 20 to October 3) for Phoebe and Prue to drive to Piper's accident? I'm assuming it was only about 10 to 20 minutes away... Just wondering if you caught that, even though you posted it a long time ago. Keep up the story, I am reading it as you update. It's good. Please go read mine now. You'll most likely have to Search to find them, since they were posted a LONG time ago, and aren't easy to find by just going through the general Charmed stories pages. They are: "The Power of Five?: The Cousin From Hell." "Nothing Is Certain"- sequel to "Cousin". "The Triumph: An Evil Charmed Circle Has Arisen." The third and final installment of this trilogy. I was thinking about making a fourth, but decided not to, since it's mostly fluff. Take care! Cam
Kohala 2006-05-17 ch 7,	abuseAnother great chapter!! I really hope you update soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Renthead07 2006-05-13 ch 1,	abuseWhen are you going to update? It's been ages. I might take your story off my Favorite Stories list if all I ever see for the next while is something supposedly going to be taken care of. Okay? Update, please, or you may lose readers.
TVCrazed 2006-03-25 ch 7,	abuseHEY. YO. I LOVE IT. ITS OFF THE HOOK. IM CRAZY ABOUT IT. PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON
Renthead07 2006-03-25 ch 7,	abuseYou paint a very good picture, and it's a great story. However, the only thing I found wrong was you maybe should space apart your descriptive parts a bit. Some were massively long paragraphs that were really hard to read, even if they described the story well. Try making a new paragraph every time you describe something new. I'll give you an idea. In the part where Phoebe has the premonition from the cell phone in Chapter 5, this is what it could look like, formatting-wise, to make it easier on the reader's eyes: "Before she could continue on speaking, her phone could be heard vibrating in her purse. She separated from Piper for a moment to see if it was Prue again. Looking at the front of her flip top phone, it read ‘manor’ on the screen. No doubt it was Prue again. When she went to go flip the top, her ears started ringing and her vision got blurry. With a mild gasp, she was sucked into a premonition. Right away, she recognized the place. It was the manor. And Prue was walking back and forth in the family room with the cordless in her hand, trying to get a hold of Phoebe. She appeared to be talking when a huge black shadow resembling the Woogyman came out of nowhere, catching Prue off guard and sending her to the floor. That was the end of her premonition and enough to send Phoebe into a panic. Forgetting about Piper for the time being, she ran into the adjacent bathroom and answered the call from the manor before it went into voice mail." See, it's not much different, but it does help. Other than that, great story, please keep updating, and I will keep reading! I've added it to my list of Favorite Stories- you're the first one, lol. :D Hope I helped.
Kohala 2006-03-21 ch 6,	abuseThis really is a great story. It's so easy to follow and the plot is very interesting. You've done a great job at staying true to the characters too!! I really hope you update soon. ^-^
malina 2006-02-25 ch 6, anon.	abusePlease PLEASE update soon... You've gotten me so curious... Love the Piper parts and hope there are a lot of Piper Leo parts in the future...
TVCrazed 2006-02-25 ch 6,	abuseYAY. PIPER'S AWAKE. MCDONALDS. CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. PLZ UPDATE SOON
charmed4eva1990 2006-02-22 ch 6,	abuseYAY! PIPER'S AWAKE! Great chapter! Update very VERY soon please!
bug collector 2006-02-21 ch 6, anon.	abuseYES! She's awake! I really liked this part and hope that you don't keep us all waiting forever for the next installment!
Bug Collector 2006-02-16 ch 5, anon.	abuseI love this story. Please update soon because I can't wait to read more. It keeps getting better!
PiperPrudenceMatthews 2006-01-03 ch 5, anon.	abusethis is a really good story please write more
versatilecutie 2005-12-03 ch 5, anon.	abusehey! well, i have to say, Way to go, Leo! that as a nice pep talk. please continue! i luv this... :-p
TVCrazed 2005-11-28 ch 5,	abuseNEVER SAW THAT COMING. OFF THE HOOK. CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. PLZ UPDATE SOON
charmed4eva1990 2005-11-28 ch 5,	abuseGreat chapter! Update very VERY soon please!

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