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| shinigami109 2007-03-28 ch 1,  | abusewhy are their names all skrewed up? |
| esb1989 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abuseput the second one up already! |
| Nitroviper 2005-10-25 ch 6, | abuseThe story is good, almost perfect, and I'm glad you didn't rush into things. For me, there is a little to much hugging and kissing and crying in these first chapters, but that doesn't affect the main story too much. Good Job, I like long fanfictions. |
| star 2005-10-15 ch 21, anon. | abuseoh! i jut loved it! can't wait for season 2! great job! :D |
| star 2005-10-15 ch 18, anon. | abusehee hee! that wuz so funny when ed said that roy was old and roy was "spluttering"! :D |
| star 2005-10-15 ch 15, anon. | abusei really like how you incorporated ed's unable use of his right arm and left leg in this chapter. it wuz ingenuis!(sp) nice, very nice! :D |
| star 2005-10-15 ch 14, anon. | abuseo! interesting! i wonder what ed will do with his newfound power! (turquoise eyes! i'm trying to picture this...hmm...looks pretty good!) :D |
| star 2005-10-11 ch 7, anon. | abusewow! it's like a cross between fma and dragonball...i think... i'm liking how it's turning out! can't wait to finish! :D |
| star 2005-10-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseoh! so deep!! and nice! :D i love ur adverbs and adjectives! |
| star 2005-10-11 ch 2, anon. | abusewoah! there's so many chapters but i bet each one is special and unique! yay! thanx so much! :D |
| star 2005-10-11 ch 2, anon. | abusewoah! there's so many chapters but i bet each one is special and unique! yay! thanx so much! :D |
| star 2005-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh! this is so cute! just luv it! ed is so smart! :D :D :D |
| WildfireDreams 2005-10-09 ch 21, | abuse^^ very nice. Please write the sequel soon. |
| Dadaiiro 2005-10-09 ch 21, | abusewow! the ending was so cute! I'm glad they at least have their mother back. Now to work for tousan! the summary you gave us about the second part of the fic sounds quite interesting! And you mentioned Goku and Gohan as well! I'm wondering... will they meat any desendant of their's? I hope you start that second part soon! I really like your writting! |
| WildfireDreams 2005-10-08 ch 20, | abuseVery nice, write more soon! |