This story is a great ep. 2 I loved it all were to start 1) I loved the changes Buffy went through, starting in the last chapter of ep. 1 and ending her as when she was a slayer she used her anger and hate, giving her power but losing control in combat, to a Jedi if she did that she could become a living monster, the brush with the Dark Side shows just how real that danger is. 2) I loved the way you tie in Willow problems from the show with the Star Wars Universe problems to make a totally believable fall to the Dark Side.3) The Family dynamic between Buffy and Anakin was top of the line. And 4) I Loved having Mace as her master, great addition.

I feel I must point out that the ships on the ground at the end of episode 2 are NOT Victory class star destroyers. The Victory class is not capable of atmospheric entry and planetary landing, as it is designed to operate solely in space. The ships you see the clone troopers marching into at the end of the movie are, in fact, the Victory's predecessor, the Acclamator-class cruiser.

These Star Wars/Buffy fusions are pretty good.

Why did you need English to Chinese translations?

Great Story!!

I so knew this was gonna happen. Ever since the Council refused to take her as a Jedi. Like you said, Willow proved in the series what's she's truly capable of. And I mean before Tara, when she resurrected Buffy using dark magic and then got addicted to the magic, jeez, she even used it against Tara! On the other hand, she also came back from all that. Will she come back this time? And what will happen with Anakin? Will he fall? Guess it'll be easier and faster to gain those answers through your third episode, I'll be going there right away.
Good fic by the way!

damn. i saw it coming, but still, darth willow. and no xander.
should make the next story, which i plan on reading now, very interessting.
good story, and a nice surprise with robo-buffy.

That was beautiful.

I am blinking away tears.

Give me a moment.

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Okay. Damn. DAMN! That was good.

Sigh

:: grin :: Reading on!

wow.

Okay, so I expected evil Willow. But not this. DAMN!

Nice job.

Okay, through my shock. On wards! Up wards!

Am I the Slayer?

I AM the Slayer.

Oh, I'm SO gonna kick some **….

Awesomeness.

Sigh. Willow. :: cries ::

GO BUF!

“Hell, since when do I listen to Master Windu?” she asked, then grinned. “Let’s misbehave.”

snicker.

Poor Buff. I should have seen the collar thing coming. Evil Willow time? Or Anakin? Yiza.

Well that was pure awesomeness.

You must choose, young Padawan, between what is right, and what is easy.”

GOLD!

A terrifying figure, clad in black armor, his cape billowing out behind him, a stead hiss of a respirator sounding from beneath the black helmet, a red lightsaber striking down an elder Jedi in some futuristic corridor… a figure she instinctivley knew to be Anakin…

NICE WORDS! Very well done. Good chappy overall - you've really worked Buffy and Willow into this story well, and it shows at this critcal junction.

reading on!

No it wasn't boring - it was a good,needed chapter. And you focused on the evil-hinting-parts. reading on!

“A Jedi is never late.” She said with a small smile, “Nor is she early. A Jedi arrives precisely when she means to.”

Awesomeness. Good movie ;-)

Ah, so there IS willow bad-**-ness. Interesting.