that's really awesome.

i like how you didn't reveal the pairings until the end, because at least we weren't held that long in suspense. and it's nice trying to guess all the characters and squint for clues.


and well, even though the drabbles were quite short, they always conveyed what they should have.


wonderful job.

loved how u kept revealed the characters at the end instead of at the end of each drabble. yeah, u doesnt get that much credit. some of these words i didnt even now like umber and taht other u word taht loked like umber. loved the writing.

So much said in relatively few words, and well-written. Good work!

The metaphors that you used, the ideas that you linked together to describe Shinobi...*glomps Crystalazer* I am always a fan of good writing, and -this- is good writing ^_^

I especially liked the line - 'a sculpture of what once was flesh turned to stone'. That whole idea about Shinobi having to discard what makes them human and turn into a killing machine is conveyed so prettily (o.0 I really do hope that that's really your intention...at least its my interpretation of the line XD)

Congratulations on finishing the set! I enjoyed them all (not just the Nejiten ones, though of course I did spend some extra time loving those) It's a very neat idea and you completed it wonderfully. =]

Nice ::thumbs up::

All I have to say is WOW.

this is just amazing. :)

>(o)

I have to say, I think your style is getting better and better. I especially liked the last paragraph - the part about how her faith in him wavers just a little for the first time, when he calls for her - and that last line is beautiful =]

You've managed to create nearly a whole history of a relationship in a short drabble o.0~! I like it a lot, as usual - especially those short lines you use -

'The sky is gray. The forest is burning. He’s running out of options. She’s dying.'

Nice. And the last line, too -

'There was already too much smoke in the forest.'

^_^ Such a sweet piece.

Aw, cool

Reading this reminds me of Sna's Kakashi/Rin fics - it's got that same bittersweet mix of the brutal and the tender, that subtle feeling which isn't entirely sad but still has that dead grief resonating between the lines. I think this is one of my favorites so far ^_^

Oh DAMN is this a good chapter. It's so sweet... yet with the touch of angst that's characteristic for you.

Love it.

M...I like the insight you give into the life of a genius. Come to think of it, all the geniuses in Naruto seem to be very angsty and all have a tragic past. (Except for Shino, perhaps, but he's not really considered a genius)

'You close your doors to the outside world. You don't need them. They don't need you.'

How lonely ><

And thank you for the dedication! You're awesome yourself ^_^

HOew true

Neh, it never fails to impress me when someone is able to take a seemingly small detail from everyday life, something quite often passed often as 'mundane', and write it into something amusing and sweet - with the added bonus of readers being able to relate to it.
I especially liked the last line ^_^