Please write more please write more please write more! I'll put up my Jak 2 outtakes if you write more!
Jak: Huh.
He doesn't like them...I wonder why?
Jak: *looks at her like she's an idiot*
?
Dax: Maybe it has to do with the fact that you PAIRED HIM UP WITH EVERYBODY!!
Hmm... maybe that's it...NEway, please write more!

*sulking because she got sent to bed last night.*
Dax: *sweatdrops* It was 10 pm!
*whiny voice* I stayed up later than that night before last! And I wanted to finish the story! Go pies!

Wierdness...Aww, kawai! *glomps chibi Jak*
Chibi Jak: ^-^
Jak: *sweatdrops*
Chibi Jak: 'M K'waiier 'n you.
Jak: You are not!
C.J.: Are so!
Jak: Are not!

Heeheeheeheeheehee! Go Jak and the vacuum cleaner! Wish I could have gone...
Jak: You don't need sugar to be insane.
But I love candy!^-^ And pepsi! ^-^ 'Tis very good!

0.0 Evil...hilarious...awesome! I wanna play 2!

Yaoi couples are hot...at lest, if both guys are. My sister's bi, which can be wierd, especially when she tries to sleep on me.
Dax: Disturbing for all parties involved.
Actually just annoying. Do you have older siblings?

Hm...*proceeds to attempt to murder Erol's ghost*
LSErol: *watches her blankly* What?
Daxter: Jak fan-girl.
LSErol: Ah.
*gets her mystical SLEDGEHAMMER OF DOOM and whacks him*
LSErol: *smashed into floor* How?
Bwahahahahahahhahaha! *proceeds to beat him through the floor.*

0.0 Cyoul. Random and hilarious, but cyoul. Keep it up!

Hiya! Hope u r better!pleeze don't end this too soon, it's fun-tastic!

That was kinda wierd...but okay! Pleeze don't give up on this story, it's amazing!

Hey, crazy's good!But can we use my idea too? Thing of something embarassing Dax might have done, it's on here!
Dax: I still say you faked some of it!

Hm...vengeance against Daxter...hmm...that's a hard one.
Jak: Hard? You drive him insane all day!
But I have special talents...
Dax: You'remore than half crazy!
Exactly. Any way, back to what I was doing...hm...if the otherside gets a random guy, can I insert a little evil into this? 'Cuz I have a tape.*holds it up*
Tape: *says 'Daxter: The Not-So-Fearless Hero.*
Basically, every time Dax does something stupid in Jak 2 or X, I put it on the tape. I also used it for home filming. Can we have them play it?
Dax: No!

Yay! I love it! It's awesome and insane! I'm so gonna tell my sister, and my brother, and maybe even my other brother! This fic is awesome!
Dax: I hate you.
Jak: *smirks*

YaY ! Get him back, this is the awesomest! I'm glad you thought of this first, I couldn't do half as good!

Humor ROX! There should be way more of it. Your fic is the first Jak humor I've read, so please, do lots! They desperatly need it!