...Wow. This fic was really powerful - the writing and storyline are both very moving. I even cried a bit... =P The theme of 'seasons' was good, it kept the story connected and moving. The detached, clipped style of writing also helps a lot in creating tension/mood.

I don't get the second part of this bit though: ' "Walk to school with me?" he asked, calm and confident expression on his face betraying the turmoil he felt inside. ' I don't know if it's just me or not, so sorry if it is.

Anyways... I really liked this story, so I hope to read more of your works soon! Maybe not so much the angsty/drama ones though, I get affected too easily. >_> Thank you for writing!

*held breath*
that was. absolutely. marvelous! the best drama I've ever read, really! not too over the top, and definitely not emotionless. just perfect ^^. i actually got tears brimming on my eyes for a moment when kazuha sing that sad song. I'm not usually easy to get sad, let alone crying. but hey, you got me :). out of all the awesome fics that you've done, i think this one is a favorite :D

thank you so much! for a very pleasant read :)

this was a sad start. but it ended beautifully. i loved how it happened, how it flowed. great job. serious, but totally striking.

NO!But I- And she- Heiji!-AH!*cries*

KIRBY:Crap Crap CRAP! Now she's crying! Katie don't cry Katie! Listen to me me! KATIE!

*continues to cry*

KIRBY: KATIE!...MIKA!

*looks up*

KIRBY: Mika how many times do I have to tell you, fanfictions aren't real. They no effect on the show. They are MADE UP. In other words, THEY DIDN'T ACTUALLY HAPPEN!

...So Kazuha is okay?

KIRBY:Yes. Yes Kazuha is ok.

*Smiles brightly* YAY! Let's go celebrate Kirby! Can't we have ice cream? I like caramel on my ice cream. Dairy Queen has great ice cream! Can we-

KIRBY: Yeah yeah, whatever. Say goodbye to the author.

BYE AUTHOR-SAN!...ice cream.

KIRBY: By author, great story by the way.

*looks up confused* Story? What story?

You are my favourite author! :D This story made me go in tears. My love for Heiji and Kazuha had deepened again

::dies::

So, so sosososososo cute. Made me all fuzzy. Love it!

I love it ^_^ Thank you

hiks.. sad story... made me cry... hiks... guess u'd succed in making this kinda story. it's a heartwrenching story and i loved it. though i kinda confused reading couple first paragraph. it's a great job :)

i love it, and it was so sad

Hey, not bad at all^^, wait at GO!!

That was fantastic. Very well written, very angsty, very sweet. Everything about it was great. Nice job.

oh such a nice story! poor Kazuha!! Poor Heiji!!
but hopefully, they've a happy ending! you're such a great H/K fanfic writer, I enjoy reading it so much!
don't forget to update your other hk fanfics!

Oh...wow. That was just amazing. Beautifully written. Crazy girl its more than ok! The way everything just weaved in was beautiful. And you could really feel the pain the two were feeling. Reading this on a loudy day doesn't help either. This really shows just what a diverse writer you are...from the fluffiest to the saddest. And the way it ended with Heiji just coming in was so symbolic and simple. Great job Fireblazie-chan!

Beautiful Fic! I'll be looking out for your work!

I will remain composed...I will be civil...I will...not...

*GLOMP GLOMP GLOMP GLOMP*

Okay, so I have no self-control. Big deal. Anyhoo...OHMIGODILOVEYOUSOSOSOSOSOSOMUCHYOURULE!!

...OMGBBQ? *laughs* Scared yet? Okay, I'm totally done now. I swear. But...well, first, I should say a ginormous Thank You. So...THANK YOU! And now, onto the actual review.

This was beautiful. Heartfelt, simple, and beautiful. The way you told it--the alternating POV, moving around in time--it was all perfect. I actually kind of suspected what was coming, but I didn't WANT to believe it until you said it outright, and then I 'bout lost it. The emotions were great, the writing was great...it was good!

Magnificient, fire-san. Absolutely great. Thank you so much!