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MissGreenpeace 2008-06-28 ch 1,	abuseheld breath that was. absolutely. marvelous! the best drama I've ever read, really! not too over the top, and definitely not emotionless. just perfect ^^. i actually got tears brimming on my eyes for a moment when kazuha sing that sad song. I'm not usually easy to get sad, let alone crying. but hey, you got me :). out of all the awesome fics that you've done, i think this one is a favorite :D thank you so much! for a very pleasant read :)
Rei Sabere 2007-12-19 ch 1,	abusethis was a sad start. but it ended beautifully. i loved how it happened, how it flowed. great job. serious, but totally striking.
katiesparks 2007-06-24 ch 1,	abuseNO!But I- And she- Heiji!-AH!cries KIRBY:Crap Crap CRAP! Now she's crying! Katie don't cry Katie! Listen to me me! KATIE! continues to cry KIRBY: KATIE!...MIKA! looks up KIRBY: Mika how many times do I have to tell you, fanfictions aren't real. They no effect on the show. They are MADE UP. In other words, THEY DIDN'T ACTUALLY HAPPEN! ...So Kazuha is okay? KIRBY:Yes. Yes Kazuha is ok. Smiles brightly YAY! Let's go celebrate Kirby! Can't we have ice cream? I like caramel on my ice cream. Dairy Queen has great ice cream! Can we- KIRBY: Yeah yeah, whatever. Say goodbye to the author. BYE AUTHOR-SAN!...ice cream. KIRBY: By author, great story by the way. looks up confused Story? What story?
Aizawa Mika 2006-09-30 ch 1,	abuseYou are my favourite author! :D This story made me go in tears. My love for Heiji and Kazuha had deepened again
Outsane 2006-08-14 ch 1,	abuse::dies:: So, so sosososososo cute. Made me all fuzzy. Love it!
Windblader 2006-06-17 ch 1,	abuseI love it ^_^ Thank you
ungu-petite 2005-10-01 ch 1,	abusehiks.. sad story... made me cry... hiks... guess u'd succed in making this kinda story. it's a heartwrenching story and i loved it. though i kinda confused reading couple first paragraph. it's a great job :)
Jazzy Uchiha 2005-09-17 ch 1,	abusei love it, and it was so sad
KaitouKudou 2005-09-16 ch 1,	abuseHey, not bad at all^^, wait at GO!!
Phantom of Spades 2005-09-16 ch 1,	abuseThat was fantastic. Very well written, very angsty, very sweet. Everything about it was great. Nice job.
chibi-Nao 2005-09-16 ch 1,	abuseoh such a nice story! poor Kazuha!! Poor Heiji!! but hopefully, they've a happy ending! you're such a great H/K fanfic writer, I enjoy reading it so much! don't forget to update your other hk fanfics!
sapphirestars 2005-09-16 ch 1,	abuseOh...wow. That was just amazing. Beautifully written. Crazy girl its more than ok! The way everything just weaved in was beautiful. And you could really feel the pain the two were feeling. Reading this on a loudy day doesn't help either. This really shows just what a diverse writer you are...from the fluffiest to the saddest. And the way it ended with Heiji just coming in was so symbolic and simple. Great job Fireblazie-chan!
DaisyAnimeluvr 2005-09-16 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful Fic! I'll be looking out for your work!
Candyland 2005-09-16 ch 1,	abuseI will remain composed...I will be civil...I will...not... GLOMP GLOMP GLOMP GLOMP Okay, so I have no self-control. Big deal. Anyhoo...OHMIGODILOVEYOUSOSOSOSOSOSOMUCHYOURULE!! ...OMGBBQ? laughs Scared yet? Okay, I'm totally done now. I swear. But...well, first, I should say a ginormous Thank You. So...THANK YOU! And now, onto the actual review. This was beautiful. Heartfelt, simple, and beautiful. The way you told it--the alternating POV, moving around in time--it was all perfect. I actually kind of suspected what was coming, but I didn't WANT to believe it until you said it outright, and then I 'bout lost it. The emotions were great, the writing was great...it was good! Magnificient, fire-san. Absolutely great. Thank you so much!
RiaSternchen 2005-09-16 ch 1,	abuseThat was so... so... ... so sad. I could not stand it... sniff My mood went from "Yeah, weekend!" to "Where are my tissues?!" Poor Kazu~ Poor Heiji~ sniffs again Next time a fluffy story, please? But I loved it anyway... huges Ria

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