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Tinnie
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
Great Scott, I'd never thought of that! Is it really only just what telescopes are supposed to do? lol Very cute little story!

Tinnie
XxSparkyxX
2005-10-26 . chapter 1
This is great. I always wondered about there being something actually wrong with the telescope. I'm glad you wrote about it. This was very entertaining. Good job!
Tracie1
2005-09-24 . chapter 1
Just when I thought I had noticed everything there was to notice, someone bursts my bubble. LOL! This is awesome! My only complaint is that it isn't longer.

“Well, Doc, I’m no scientist, but -- isn’t that called ‘focusing?’

That line made me laugh out loud. I can't believe I never thought of that in all these years. I guess I've always been naive to think that Clara had been telling the truth.

Great job!
Anakin McFly
2005-09-16 . chapter 1
Didn't notice that... Then again, I've never had much experience with telescopes.

Actually I thought a drabble was supposed to be only 100 words long... oh well.
Eternal Density
2005-09-16 . chapter 1
Ohh, I never thought of that! Well, I almost did :D
Good fun read, this is.
"You have to focus, Doc" Was that meant to be a pun?
Stoko
2005-09-16 . chapter 1
Hehe, cool, I never thought about it that way before. But I thought when you focussed it, you twisted part of it. When she demonstrated her problem and said "turn it the other way", I thought she actually turned her body to look in another direction.
chrisfardell
2005-09-15 . chapter 1
This is cool
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