 SeverusSnapePotionsMaster13 2005-09-20 . chapter 1That is a very sweet story, but also so sad. You are a very talented writer. I could feel and see everything that you were describing perfectly. I also like the ending. |
 Imhilien 2005-09-17 . chapter 1 Very moving... |
 Dr. Embattledcurve 2005-09-16 . chapter 1well it was hastily written in some parts, as though skipped through. |
 lovethelab 2005-09-16 . chapter 1 Such a sad and happy ending. I guess it is never too late to learn. Great story |