OK will review as I read. Sorry about the delay. Just haven't been on the net recently. MEh what can you do? Anyho saw that you delted great wonder one question WHY? It was coming on well. + it would make sense to have it up if this is the sequal. Thanks for the reviews. Much appreciated.

Back to the review. Ahh metal chicks. No better people on this wonderful planet. Oh yeh letme just say this chapter is big, BIG and umm yeah big.

childish cold? soft force? For some reason that doesn't seem to go, for me anyway. Oh hospital window bit was good.

Howl on there. Another mettler on the scene. Is there a tour on or something here. If so can I get tickets?

Aerial hmm. Take out e and l put in an m at the beginning and what do you have thats right maria. Sorry to point it out kid but it looks awfully similar.

As to the monster. Not bad though a bit more description would have been good on that front.

Bringing smells in is good for a story. The more sensory description the better is what I say. Good job with that.

Ok finished reading it. Yaay. In conclusion. Great job so far if a bit long. the length was a bit intimidating but apart from that its fine. Look forward to the second chapter. Take care. TTFN
Cheers
Wolf

I got your reviews:) Thanks! I just thought I'd read this fic...

I was really impressed by this one, I loved the descriptive quality to it and your characterisations are top notch too. I love where the plot line is going too, well done, this rocks:)

~Inguz

Wow, just wow! I do not normally critque at one chapter, which you know this by now because I have been reviewing your other fictions, but just to make an exception here. This was a longer chapter than most people start out with. I do say, though, I love the name of this Silent Hill story. The One Man's God and the The One God's Creation. That is just so orginal it is unbelievable.

*Your characters-Regan being the main, Aerial, Kayla, and Dominick being the others-show a great and natural sense of being, well, human! You portrayed them as any human would in those situations, true to their character.

*Your plot has yet to be completely detailed, but it seems the occurance with Kayla is a piece, no doubt. I am very curious due to the title of the story.

*Your use of words is the same as always--Very, VERY good.

I am NOT disappointed with your new story. I have to ask, though, why did you delete the others? (Not including Fatal Frame, or the poem SH, those are still up... KEEP THEM UP!) I was really enjoying Great Wonder. However, the name of this story makes me think that John Revenphate's Great Wonder still has a place somewhere in your writing.

I love this! Don't stop writing it! Finish this! Update soon!