I haven't started to read the story yet, but i can tell i'm gonna like it in by the way you told to go ** themselves pretty much if they didn't like it xD

Geat chapter, and it was to add ib bits of your Brazilian/Portugese heritage as well. And yeah, brothers are expendable!

You're doing well, keep on keeping on.

You might want to get a spell check or something like that. Otherwise, keep on keeping on.

Your story may have potential, but I only got halfway through the first page when I got turned off my the horrendous grammer errors. Ranma's and Akane's speech sounds very wrong. You make everyone sound like English professors or something.

Youve made your self insert a hard ** haven't you? Keep on keeping on.

Okay, I'm I gonna have to start calling you Hannibal Himura? And I don't want to hear anything about how hungry your cursed form is. SHOW SOME CONTROLL DANM IT! Now keep up the great work and get out those new chapters! ^_^

Nice update, still going strong.

Nice update!

Sincerely,
TO/BB(Tommy Oliver Brachio Black) formerly known as AshK

This fanfic looks to be pretty good.

When it comes down to it Nabiki is the best choice for Benji. With a girl like her they'll never lack for money.

That's strange. Wasn't Benji going to ride off to fight in the past chapter? Still, great chapter.

A prelude to an asskicking! The goodbye was touching. The details on the cultural diferences were nice too. Eagerly awaiting the action coming next chapter...

Okay, I like how you're going back in forth between the original timeline with Nabiki's memories and the new alternate timeline in which Benji is in Valhalla. Not only that, you've got Ranma questioning everything about himself and his feelings, something Genma would have called Ranma a weak little girl over. But just what does occidental mean and when is my character showing up?

Keep up the great work!

Cool, Nice battle with Cu! It reminds me of Highlander!