'She had even went to Italy once'- 'had even gone to'. Aside from that... Wow. Squee. That was nice, in a dark-ish sort of way.
~Naolin

I hear the convent is looking for more young people to join everyday, jking! it was good

VERY well done! I liked this quite a bit. My only criticism would be the end. It seemed to fade out and tie up too neatly. The rest was wonderful, however.

Well done! -MZM

I liked it. It showed a clinical reason of how she could have developed MPD. I liked how the way you described her as a child. Yumiko still has that almost happy go lucky sense about her untill a mission comes up. This is going in my favorites list.