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Starlit Warrior
2008-07-21
ch 17,
abuseHey! This is a good story too! =P
Neccor
2008-07-01
ch 17,
abuseLove the story and the original idea behind in the HP story. I look forward to your updates!
Fayth
2008-06-27
ch 17, anon.
abuseT_T. You're not continuing this, and I want you to. Very badly. And you want to, you know you do. >>.

Unlike a lot of fanfiction (everyone's gay in fandom!) you've written the canon characters with authenticity. Draco surely would just assume someone, especially a lowly firstie, would jump at the chance to sit by him, the Huffles would assume any help from a Slytherin was cheating, and Snape is very, very biased toward his own House.

I also like how Malclom and crew are Slytherins but not stereotypical, though I have to wonder how you're going to deal with the fact that all of Slytherin house walked out in the seventh book, when Malcolm's characterization suggests he would do no such thing. I realize this is quite a bit in the future (assuming Malcolm lives that long), but your story is good enough that I'm thinking that far in the future. :).

Feel free to email me a rebuttal, they make me happy.
Kitsune no Kutsuu
2008-06-13
ch 17,
abuseyay you! its very good. keep up the good work!

see you next update!

>.< Vm
Kybo
2008-06-10
ch 17,
abuseSo I realize that this is on a kind of hiatus while you work on NoFP, but just wanted to say this is another really great story, and I'll be waiting for the next update! As always, your characters are really well developed and three dimensional, and the development seems true to character. It's cool seeing things from the other side of the fence for once.

Peace Out
~Kybo
Rob Davidoff
2008-06-08
ch 17, anon.
abuseI found your work through a recomendation on the (their page on recomended fanfics), which led me to your NoFP fic. After reading it, I checked your author page to see if there was anything else of your work to binge myself on. Frankly, I think this is actually the better story of the two, or at least the one I liked best. The thing at the bottom of this input box is telling me that "it is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer." So, here goes: consider taking this one off of haitus, it's a really good story, and seeing it sat on for a long time in favor of a story I don't like as much is...annoying to say the least. Anyway, like your stuff, keep up the good work.
Oni De Nuit
2008-06-04
ch 17,
abuseIt's a bit tragic that Malcolm is only thirteen and he's already doomed to die. Unless of course he is able to remain calm enough to produce and unimpeded flow of magic that could possibly correct the instability at his magical core.

Cool story, good to see slytherins out there breaking the mold. Snape's a Jack-**.

Can't wait to read more.
ShadeHawk
2008-05-19
ch 9,
abuseNote that in later books JKR states that "riderless" carriages are actually drafted by thestrals (which most students can see, but Malcolm can). Yay for rewriting rules... ;-)
illjwamh
2008-04-30
ch 17,
abuseDon't get me wrong; I love "Nightmares". But I wouldn't complain, say, if the updates on it were to slow down a little as a result of you working on this again.
Verfassergeist
2008-04-28
ch 17,
abuseExcellent. But not as good as Nightmares.

But who is Nigel? I'm drawing a blank.

Verfassergeist
Blue Eyes White Dragon 1988
2008-04-28
ch 17,
abuseThis story is amazing, as is a good number of things you write. I like the interesting twists you added to Rowling's world. Especially the comparisons in accomplishments between muggle/magic. "If we ignore things,if we just say "oh,it's just a sill muggle device", then we are limiting ourselves to only one world when we can have two. I'm not even convinced, That this is the stronger of the two" Malcolm chapter 17

Optimistically- I hope that Malcolm lives.

Realistically- He probably won't ;_;

I look forward to more. :)
Alejandro
2008-04-25
ch 17, anon.
abuseHi there,
i really liked the story so far, sad it's on hiatus. I Hope you find the time and muse to continue the Blackwand chronicles.

regards
Alej
Zera Silver
2008-03-08
ch 17,
abuseThis is the first story of its type that I've com across and I must say I enjoy it a lot. It is well written and the characters are well developed. I congratulate you on a amazing story.
xyvortex
2008-03-03
ch 17,
abuseSorry to see this one go by the wayside. Things did go off track a bit with the unstable magical core... That part seemed a bit unnecessary to the plot line. Still, a side story that would have followed Malcolm and the HP story line had real merit.

Can't wait for updates on NOFP and Team 8
frostic blitz
2008-02-12
ch 17, anon.
abuseThis is a really good story. I like how you've managed to build your own "world", so to speak, within Rowlings. It's really interesting to see a few of the things that happened in PoA from a different perspective. I hope you continue with this as I'm anxious to see what happens next. I want to see how Malcolm's disease thing works out, and what's up with Annalise.
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