I like the beginning of this story, however Snape seems very passice and baby-ish in this story, therefore I can not get into it very much. I feel that your short chapters are very tedious to read, because you read a few sentences and then go to the next page. You do not need to put at the beginnign and end of each chapter what people will say. The Description of each chapter before and after the chapter are both rundantant. If I want to know what people will say, I will just read further down the page.

Nice story! The chapters are a bit short, but i like the way it's written. I really like your descriptions of the following chapter and the titles of the chapters!

Good story! Highly enjoyable!

Well Luna obviously! lol She keeps him grounded. Maybe Susan?? I like this new Potions Master!

Nice of Seamus! No Richard, Harry would never allow anyone to suffer and die if he could stop it.

Wonderful!! Things are looking up!

Nicely done, Severus, nicely done. Such a sweet thing. They need homes!

Excellent! What a fun chapter! I am glad that maybe Petunia is coming around. Harry may need to have Dudley tested for magic ad maybe Petunia. Also test them for compulsion spells.

Maybe Sibyll had a charm to be bad at Divination?

Those children most definitely need homes! That bas*!!

Excellent! Those children need families! I hope you can find them some.

I love it! Harry should have told Dickie and Rita just who Tom Riddle was.

Way good!! Love the red chair!

Sounds beautiful! Well Severus! You are looking hot! Those ladies are older and better not dead!

Excellent! More good stuff!