Reviews for Detention Room

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mars1394 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abusethat was very very cool
Chibi-Penguin-Chan 2007-03-04 ch 1,	abuseWow. That's all I can say, just wow. Even with the grammar mistakes this story was amazing. Very well written, very meaningful. A nice break from all the mindless fics being written and posted.
XxtripplequestionmarkxX 2007-01-20 ch 1,	abuseI've been in detention so many times I couldn't posibly tell you. I have my own reserved seat in detention. I've had singles, dubbles, and saturdays. And it's nothing like that, in any school. The teacher would never leave the room and even if he or she did, the teacher would get another teacher to watch the classroom. And within those few seconds while the teacher is gone, all that would happen would be a couple of people murmering a few words and openly passing the notes they had be expertly exchanging while the teacher was there. No yelling, no fighting. And ever since Columbine, EVERY school has put in place a ZERO TOLERENCE POLICY; no one goes to detention for geting in a fight, you get arrested and taken away in handcuffs and you get suspended. Not put in a room with the same person you were just fighting with to have the teacher leave the room and you just start at it again. And you don't get a single detention for a food fight. Food fights are actually dangrous because they spread germs. Now I'm sure you're thinking thats not that bad but it's the same as spitting on someone; which by the way you can get arrested for because you can give someone AIDs like that. And even if this does take place in a fantasy world, i'm sure they still wouldn't be put in the same room with out being supervised. And Ino would not have run away form Sakura, she would have stood up for herself. And I'm sorry if this turned out to be a flame, I don't useually write flames. But one of my pet peeves is when people, who've never been in detention, think they know what it's like because they've watched people get detention on tv or they've sceen the Breakfast Club. Dentetion is not scary or anything else like how they show it on tv.
Dinkus 2006-06-11 ch 1,	abuseWow. that was great. i can sense how their friendship was once strong, but theyre drifting apart for some reason, and it's really killing them inside. you should continue this oneshot one day. make it into a story, you know?
I play wid fir3 2006-06-04 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. Very, very interesting. But, remember, Ino and Sakura were friends before!
Deiade Forgotten 2006-03-08 ch 1,	abuseI like it.
Mini-Chobi 2006-02-01 ch 1,	abuseAw... shoot. Shika missed out on the lecture. Kuso... Ah well. Very well writeen, the moral hidden quite well. Very impressive. lol. I'm starting to sound like one of those awkwardly cheesy science fair judges, aren't I? lol. This was good. Very very good! ^^ And... sigh ...what on earth happens to all the other characters? Lee? Chouji? :( Shino?
fRenZ4EveR 2005-11-26 ch 1,	abusewhoa. you are a good writer.
Rel 2005-10-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like it... it's so great... lol... and YEAH! GO SAKURA! INO SUCKS!! Lol... kidding... hahaa!
fanadict 2005-10-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseUr an AEWSOME writer im so frickin proud of u
iigaken 2005-10-07 ch 1,	abuseyay!
MazdaKitsune 2005-09-18 ch 1,	abuseHeh,I remember when I got into Detention...Good Job!
HinatasBiggestFanBoy 2005-09-18 ch 1,	abuse^^;; that was a lil odd to me, but it was a good fic, wud b cool to see if u eventually mold it into a story (yes i know rite NOW its a one-shot, lol but that hasnt stopped ppl b4)
lexy499 2005-09-17 ch 1, anon.	abusecool!
Sakurachild 2005-09-17 ch 1,	abusethis is awsome. I love how well written it is, and very discriptive. you did a great job.

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