well you haay to any quotations in the story making it hard to tell when people are talking even though the story has a good plot... it needs more emotion

WAH PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL!

how cute! but sometimes the fight scenes are so long i had to skip them but its cute! i wish there was a sequel to it..

wow that was fantastic! you really know your stuff!! keep upthe good work

First off, why are you writing your dialogue script-style? Quotation marks should be fine.
How come Oro came to Konoha with Kimimaro, but without Kabuto?
The fights were bland and inaccurate. Sasuke can barely hold his own against Orochimaru. He could not break the Sannin's shins. All that happened in the Kimimaro fight was people getting thrown toward walls.
You're putting too much focus on Katara, and you've made her a Mary-Sue. Having Oro and Itachi after your OC is cliche. Also, how can she perform DOUBLE rasengan and chidori if Kakashi and Jiraiya haven't trained her? The gold wings, hair color change, and eye color change are all Sue traits.
Katara doesn't have to be all-powerful. If she can beat Naruto and Sakura just by throwing them, there's a problem.
That's all I have to say.

Teri! cool story! Man im seriously ur fic idol! Make more make more make more!

Isn't lit Kimimaro? Don't reply by email. it's down

Please Update soon or whenever you can!Gr8 chapter I luv it!
luv,
shadow-5-girl

dis story is gettin good buh it would b much easier eef u press "enter" every time someone speaks so it doesnt look all da confusing...tho ur storyy is really good!

We learned how to turn off bold! -Claps-

really! freakishly good! =] update, k?

My God, you just butchered all the major villians and then some. Why would Itachi side with the ANBU, who, I might add, are out to destroy him? Ah, Attach of the Zombie!Anbues!! Oh-noes! Orochimaru would not be all "Gar!" about being kicked in the SHINS. You make him seem like he's 5 instead of 50. And where are all the quoatations? Did they just say screw this and go out for coffee? And your grammer and word choice is so horrible it made me feel sick just to read it. AND I hated how you bashed Sakura and just used her and Naruto as background noises. And I noticed that you went "OhMiGod! Look at Katara! She's being possessed by her DRAGON spirit! She's tho thpecial! Look at how much PAIN she's in, but it's so romantic! I mean, the emotions are so deep...and Naruto's possessed too."
To sum it up, I...hated...this...story. End.

Please update!
luv,
shadow-5-girl

She lives!

omg...she stabbed herself! I so can't wait to see...uh...read what happens next!