You're...really good at writing. I hope you haven't stopped for good! I enjoy your Immortal Rain fics, especially the ones with Yuka - it's as if you understand him, can delve into his personality. Even if the fics are kind of depressing, it does match with the general feel of Immortal Rain. Please continue your RainMachika story!

I love it when people can so accuratly describe the emotions of characters they love. You've done amazingly well. Well Done

Question! *waves hand in the air* Pick me! Pick me!
Is this ongoing or a one-shot? Please make me happy and say it will be ongoing, because your style is great. Minor technical note: it'll sound more polished in the beginning if you cut back a little on the adverbs. It seems to sound a little awkward when so many words end in -ly. Just towards the beginning though; the rest is fantastic.
go write and make me happy!
~linz~

You know, I'm not really entirely sure where you come up with your inspiration. You'll have to tell me sometime... It's not fair that you write better than I do! Anyway, very, very, very, very cool. I'm impressed, especially since I read that part of the manga. Good job.

Nice, I am such a sucker for romance stories. I haven't read much past the first manga, so I was confused, but I still loved the story, Rain is awesome.

Wow. Cool. And Wow.I loved it. it was emotional and smart
and I think you were true to the characters. You should write more. I look forward to possibly seeing more in the future;)