Whoo, angst galore. Hm, I dunno, it just seems kind of odd that her dad would turn all abusive just like that.

GREAT STORY! Why would anyone do that to their own daughter? That's beyond me. Anywayz...that was great. Can't wait to read your next fic!

VERY GOOD! YOU captured What I think It'd Mean To be an Abused Child even years later!

That was really good! well done! keep it up my friend! :)