that was a great story. on my way to reading the sequel right now

i really loved this story. i loved all the drama and that thriller that keeps you on edge. i also love how how john's and mel's loved prevail through all the obstacles put in their way. awesome job on the story.

Why do bad things happen to good people?

Nice one. I can't imagine the two of them like that. Hahahahaha

What is it?

poor, poor child.

OMG! That was the best story i have read! It's like somethings happening every chapter.

OMG! You love wrestling too? I love Cena, and Trish and well frankly everyone you like. Cenas songs rock! My sister got me into wrestling, I love Dx, my favourite stunt of theirs so far wouls have to be their Impersonations of Shane-o-mac and Vincent. Hustle Loyalty Respect, all the way!!

hey!
Once I started reading this story, I literally couldn't stop! It took me a while, but I finished! lol
So, just wanted to say that I like it!..A LOT!
l8r
Linz

great ending! loved it! I'll look for a seuqel!

great new chapters! on to reveiw the next one!

i love it! great ending to. you should have a sequel. and have like Ryann win the diva search and blah blah blah

omg! i love it so much! i have one last chapter. so sad to me.

i love it! its ending soon and thats sad. o well i love it!

I don't understand why you are demanding 5 reviews after every chapter of your story. You have over 120 reviews for 47 chapters, and it has taken you almost a year to get that many chapters. Obviously you have readers that enjoy your story, the amount of reviews you already have proves it. Why do you need more? Personally, I like your story, but I don't always leave reviews of stories I like. I rarely can think of things to say in reviews, but it upsets me when I see successful stories being limited to when they are going to be updated by how many reviews the author gets. If you want to continue the story, then do so even if you get no reviews. You should post stories if you want to, not just to get reviews.