Very interesting story. I am hoping you will pick up the story at some point in the future.

Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.

This is an awesome story. Just curious about one thing. Since Ranma is the only full-blooded female saiyan, will Vegeta try to persuade her into having a kid with another full-blooded saiyan?

This was a good chapter, which makes it even worse that you abandoned this fic. Why is it that every fic of this type that's actually good never gets finished?

Just to say, I think you suck for leaving this story, but onto the review.
Very nice, mainly explainations, but it's needed to get to the point where we can understand everything. Only two things to point out:

Training differences: You're right when you say that there should be a big difference in power, but you make it seem as if Ranma's original form didn't change at all. That wouldn't make sense seeing as even in canon training in one form transferred to the other (an example being when Ranma got locked by Cologne)

The last pointer that a user pointed out to you in this chapter: Get you facts straight! It shows a lot of the saiyan females with tails in the Bardock movie. Hell, look up Fascha (one of Bardocks companions), she is shown with a tail and transformed as well (this by nature needing a tail). Just pointing stuff out.

I so love how you reversed the first scene to get Ranma carrying Genma, lol

i am sory but your repitition is really getting anoying and that added to the fact that you keep throwing out instant answers to every thing is really geting on my nervs you keep going on and on about "yay im a girl/ yay were family lets beat the panda"

I like it. the whole "Ranma liking being a female and being a stronger female then male" thing is a great twist on the story. I don't agree with the idea of Ryoga as a male Saiyan, though. There has to be some level of difference between Ranma and Ryoga, so I was thinking the lost boy would look better in Green. Namekians are much more suited to being lost and alone anyway. I also think that, if you are going to have DB characters, I suggest having them be visiting from another world (like Goku still during his disappearance after Defeating Freeza). It is easier to explain the lack of the DB world's features.
PS.
Don't try to integrate the Dragonballs themselves into this story, except as a reason for having the characters from that show passing through. They tend to hurt the story.

PLEASE REVIVE THIS!

Great story. I hope you continue this sometime.

Pity. Another well written story which isn't updated.

It makes me want to weep, the dreaded feeling that this story is forever dead and buried. I hope beyond hope that this is not the case, but the evidce sugjusts otherwise. If you could find it in yourself to update this even just once in a blue moon, I would be estatic, but, I must be relistic and and come to the the conclusion that this is a dead fic. Oh, how I weep.

Well, thanks for writing what you did of this, and good bye for now.

awsome story cant wait till you update

Good job on the story, please add more soon.
However you do use the word "for" more than you need to, some sentences will work fine withor it.
Also, did you have something against men when you wrote this?

I think this is good story. I was wondering if you were going to update it. If you are please tell me.

Well I Gotta GO! SEE YA!