this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

cool! this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh this is good! This is rib-tickling good! Please PLEASE find your muses and continue this! This Old Bat hasn't laughed so hard for a few months!

As for ideas, well, since you're stretching canon a bit, why not have Nodoka not the ditz that she's usually portrayed? Nor have her the stern, "even the Yakuza are afraid of her" matron she's been portrayed in some fanfics but somewhere in between. Perhaps. Others have given you some valid ideas as well so I won't repeat them. ::chuckles::

I like how you're keeping the cursed sides apart. Human male and Saiyan female, that is. And having Ranma actually acting intelligent is a plus also. After all, despite Genma's obvious, and intentional, scholastic and socialization isolation, Ranma's quite intelligent. He'd HAVE to be in order to pick up all that he has as quickly as he has if he weren't.

Take care, hon, and thanks for sharing.

I enjoyed the scroll scene, as far as I'm currently aware it was only the second of its kind.

Might I suggest that most of those scolls as bing stollen out-right from all the masters the visited or from the Amazons? I'm in support of the non saiyan curse for Ryoga, maybe no curse at all. It would be a nice change for once.

I'm also in favor of the Truely loving mother aspect for Nodoka, and wou;d suggest a divorce

for her sexist freak of a husband.

All in all with the curse no matter which sex Ranma prefers, Ranma would have to be bi-sexual becuase he would love the person in both forms. Also for the same reason the lover would have to at least bi-curious. I'm in favor of a female for the standard reason and be cuase it well another slap in the face to Genma when Ranma trains his lover to be stronger than he.

i really enjoyed reading this story and hope someday you might continue it

this is one of the best fully female ranma fics i've read & I'm hoping it'll be continued soon however there's a slight problem with the honorifics of Oneechan & Imotouchan since you seem to accidently reverse them at times for example:

Kasumi looked angry too, and that was a state of mind that was quite alien to her. "What a fine best friend our father has there, hasn't he?" she said sarcastically. "No offense against you, but your father is indeed a bastard. And I will enjoy doing my part so that he can not harm any of us. That includes you too, Ranma-oneechan."

The Saotome girl smiled at her 'big sister'. "Thanks, Kasumi-imotouchan. I'll enjoy it too, you can count on it. And once I get that mallet-technique working he'll regret the day he fooled around with me!"

here you have kasumi the oldest call ranma older sister which was suppose to be younger sister (Imotou) & you had ranma call kasumi little sister which should have been older sister (Oneechan) those the same age i believe use sister (Neechan).

all in all though this is a great story & has a damn well thought out out plot so far & I'm intrigued in seeing how this plot goes.

Will this fic be continued?

I do hope so...

Same gender love I can see, even if it doesn't do any thing for me, specially m/m. Sorry, but that includes Ranma.

I just can't see him changing, even driven by hormones. And even if Cologne helped break most of Genma's Misogyny (pronounced /mɪˈsɒdʒɪni/)indoctrination, there is there at least 5 yrs before at home that is the main time for shaping a child. That's at least 15 years. You want to undo "all" that in less than one year? Can't see it.

Have you considered a conversation trap for Nodoka where she hears the girls discussing a boy they met at summer school. He was there so he could makeup what his baka father refused to teach him. He said he didn't think he wanted to go home to a mother who wants him to commit suicide because of some silly crap about manliness? At least, that lets them see how she truly reacts. Evil grin, gives Nodoka a beginning clue about how badly her husband was as a teacher, and what her dreams may have cost her.

If she joins them, they could give her more information their acquaintance/friend had given them abut his training/torture trip. And all the feelings he had let them learn about of what everyone was trying to force on him to do to uphold his "Quote -Unquote", honor. And that he might be thinking of going ronin.

I have learned personally that best friends make terrific loved companions (wife). Any chance that Ranma might start a family with all the Tendo girls and whoever else he decides to train? Helps keep the Saotome techniques in the Ninja group they are starting.

Or is it, restarting? Is anyone in the group going to research the true background of the Saotome Ninjas?

Mmm, if Nodoka turns out OK, how about asking her and Cologne to be the Mentor/Elders to guide the group. Might help Shampoo get away from that blind duck, and out of china. (Evil thought) Is there a spring of a drowned mouse? Could Shampoo be supplied with a LARGE case of rat traps?

If any of the above inspire anything, help yourself.

Thanks for the "interesting" and fun story. Updated: 11-26-05, going to put it in my Story Alert list on the off chance you find the time or use to pick it up again.

May the MUSE always be with you!

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saiyan women don't have tails? then how does Fasha/Seripa go OOzaru in "Bardock: the father of Goku"? Tell me that. all Saiyans Can Go Oozaru. IT's not possible with out a tail. and besides I've read some adult Doujin involving Fasha and Bardock, they are going at, see the moon, change, and realize some other saiyan dude was watching them, cuase he changed too.

this is good...is it dead?

this story is one of a kind i wish i thought of it till next message bye

just to let you know the only full blooded female Saiyan that appeared in the dragonball story has a tail that you can see in the pitchers that she is in. Her name is Fasha, and she is part of bardock team.

mou... i really love this story and have read all 5 chaps. & its upsetting that u havent updated in so long. i want to read the rest of ur wonderful ideas. please please please update this story!

Interesting story it would be nice to see you take it up again

any chance for an update?