Oh wow! What a turn of events! This is definitely very, very good! And I have a feeling, as to who the two old friends are - or maybe a hope...? _ Keep up the great work, and post more when you can.

Oh. My. Gosh. THIS IS SOME OF THE BEST OUTLAW STAR STUFF I'VE EVER READ. Mind you, I haven't read much, but this is still REALLY GOOD! PLEASE finsih!

Very unique peice of writing, even if it did have an original character in it. I'm usually against the new character stories, but this is an exception, and he has a reason for being there. Please, continue! :D

When is the last time you up-dated this story? When will you put up ch.4? I want to find out what happens!Please write more!

Wow, that's a very interesting, original way to explain some about Mel's past ... It's all very cool; very interesting! This is a great read, and I hope you continue and post another part soon.

Muchly cool! .; I can't wait for some more of this - poor Jim. .; And Melfina, for that matter. Excellent job, please continue!

Slippery Sal, eh? *raises eyebrow* And poor Jim! I really feel bad for him, sometimes, *lol* Gene is just downright wrong! _ I'm looking forward to what'll happen with Mel next, and also finding out if Annie is going to be playing an important role. Keep it up!

can't wait for more. poor annie she lost her mom.

4 months inbetween chapters. Sure it was a long chapter but could we spiff it up? I can't wait that long!

I'm definately intrigued by this, Nate! Keep it up.

What did you kill Lady Iraga for?