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| Beaglicious 2006-10-28 ch 1,  | abuseThis was so so so sad...quite a different side of Ray than we're used to seeing. Loved the angstyness of it all. Poor Ray! Nice job portraying his emotions. |
| rmncfan 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sad but it is really well written! You are a great writer! |
| allenhrt@yahoo.com 2006-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! I mean...wow. That just reached out and squeezed everything out of my heart. I'm still teary. I always love what you write but you have really caught me with this one. Thanks. |
| butterflyswest 2006-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abusegood stuff love your writing |
| navycorpsman 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abuseYou know what I like about this? This describes how I'm feeling 7 years after my dad's death. I've NEVER been able to put it in words, and somehow, you've done it. This is lovely, beautiful, and I can TOTALLY relate! :( *STANDING OVATION!* |
| TheTroubleWithLoveIsYou 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abusehow? thanks, deni :( |
| Dingbat142001 2005-10-03 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* *sniff* Damn you. I'm all choked up. That was beautiful. |
| Anonymous 2005-09-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. That was a beautiful story. I can almost feel Ray's pain. |
| methehuman 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseASH! THAT MADE ME CRY! I mean, it really did. I'm crying right now. Thats too sad for words! WHY'D SHE HAVE TO DIE? poor Ray. I really need to get my emotions in control, lol. |
| Lora Perry 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseHoly shi^t! Increadible! and wonderful, and beautiful and just gourgeous... Where is this LJ community? |
| espergirl04 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseWow...short but poignant. I'm really looking foward to reading more of your work, great job. |
| SmilinStar 2005-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've been reading all your Ray/Neela stories and they are just all amazing! This one was so sad and moving. Short, (but i think thats good, as it keeps the atmosphere) and just, well, wow! Thanks for the reads, keep writing, SmilinStar x |
| fc2001 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseRe-read this this morning, and it's still brilliant. It still makes me cry. But don't worry - that's a good thing, really. Lol, Fi. |
| krazypirategurl 2005-09-17 ch 1, | abusethis was sad but i liked it |