This was so so so sad...quite a different side of Ray than we're used to seeing. Loved the angstyness of it all. Poor Ray! Nice job portraying his emotions.

This is so sad but it is really well written! You are a great writer!

Wow! I mean...wow. That just reached out and squeezed everything out of my heart. I'm still teary. I always love what you write but you have really caught me with this one. Thanks.

good stuff love your writing

You know what I like about this? This describes how I'm feeling 7 years after my dad's death. I've NEVER been able to put it in words, and somehow, you've done it. This is lovely, beautiful, and I can TOTALLY relate! :(

*STANDING OVATION!*

how?

thanks, deni :(

*sniff* *sniff*

Damn you. I'm all choked up.

That was beautiful.

Wow. That was a beautiful story. I can almost feel Ray's pain.

ASH! THAT MADE ME CRY!

I mean, it really did. I'm crying right now.

Thats too sad for words!

WHY'D SHE HAVE TO DIE?

poor Ray.

I really need to get my emotions in control, lol.

Holy shit! Increadible! and wonderful, and beautiful and just gourgeous...

Where is this LJ community?

Wow...short but poignant. I'm really looking foward to reading more of your work, great job.

I've been reading all your Ray/Neela stories and they are just all amazing!

This one was so sad and moving. Short, (but i think thats good, as it keeps the atmosphere) and just, well, wow!

Thanks for the reads, keep writing,

SmilinStar x

Re-read this this morning, and it's still brilliant. It still makes me cry. But don't worry - that's a good thing, really.

Lol, Fi.

this was sad but i liked it