i loved this story so much i read all the chapters and i loved the couples

Well...they are really messed up...still good though. Great quote at the end too.

Very good first chapter. I like what you've done with Richards story, very interesting. Can't wait to read more ^^

This is the best story ever I read it when it was complete and i just think its wounderful. sorry i didn't review earlier but i forgot:)

I love yours Story

This was a good chapter. I loved how you used the playground in a symbolic way at the end, that was fairly deep.

Wow. That's all I can say. Wow. This has to be the longest fanfiction I've ever read, or seen. It took me two whole weeks o get through!!(I read 250-500 page books daily, so thats saying something)Your writing is amazing. No grammar mistakes that I noticed either. You did a really good job of translating the Titans and the episodes into the AU. And Raven's father being a gang leader fit perfectly. It must have been hard to think up. My favortie chapters were the ones based on The Beast Within. It was my favorite episode, but I think you actuly did it better than the TV show. Malichor was great. He is a evil dragon trapped inside a book by an anchient curse that trcked Raven into falling in love with him and freeing him. How do you do that without magic? Well, you obviously manage just fine. I laughed my head off when I understood who he was.(just so theres no offense, I laugh at everything unless it's badly done or sad. The harder I laugh, the better it is) I would love to offer constructive critizisum(spelling?), but there is nothing to critisize! Thank you! :)

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This is a fantastic story with a well orcestrated plot and accurate characters. I admire your writing skills and your perseverance to compleate such a long story. Bravo! Keep up the incredible work!

awesomeness! love it already!

Well this bleary eyed tweety year old is going to go to sleep for the night or morning judging from the light streaming through my window.

Just call trigon malificent, raven price philip and roll all the faires together and call them Gar

That is my favorite book I've only read it about seven times and have three difrent copies one to write notes in, one to read and one that is fancy.

Malcom Malchior I finanly put it together

Tim it's a little weird having tim older than richard

I don't remeber if i've reviewed for this story yet as I usually don't review untill the chapteer on completed stories but I just wanted to let you know that I love this story and all the coplexities. It is really well thought out. I love that some of the bad guys are good. I hope that by the time I've finished reading this story Selina will be with Bruce.

A very impressed reader,
Angelii