A wonderful, beautiful story. I loved the raw emotions and evocative imagery. Please keep writing. I know this is an older story, and maybe you have moved on with life, but even if you no longer write for FF, pleases do not let such a talent go to waste. I am going to your profile now to read all other stories you have written. Thank you for such a wonderful experience. I hope you receive this review personally.

I just love the way you write your stories. Vastly entertaining. Gokurou!

Thank you so much for telling us the kakairu story behind the glimpse of them in anime! This is so beautiful. (even though I thought they had actually met on the roof top after the disagreement, but who cares.)

I REALLY REALLY HOPE YOU CAN WRITE A STORY IN THE MEMORY OF KAKASHI'S DEATH. AS A MATTER OF FACT, KAKASHI KINDA DIE FROM SAVING IRUKA...SO PLEASE...

Well! I enjoyed this quite a bit. I thought it was fun and cute, and very interesting with the two POVs. Thanks for posting!

i'm glad it ended happily. the sadist in me wanted it to end chapter 8, but the fluff-addict in me needed love. so either way and i was happy. and i am happy. so yay! also i loved kakashi's thought of sandaime taking care of them from beyond death. very nicely done. i'm so sad it's over... why does it have to be over? can't you continue it forever and ever? hmm, i suppose that'd be a smidge too greedy. damn.

meep. this was good too. sad and raw, i love it. i loved seeing both sides of the fight as well.

aw! this chapter is one of my favorites so far (besides the first 2 which were wonderful)! i loved iruka's line about being kakashi's fuckbuddy (i'm not even trying to paraphrase it). very, very nicely done.

oh, poor horny iruka! ha! how funny. i loved this chapter. very funny, yet oddly sweet. a lovely combo.

only thing i can point out is i notice a few typos, very minor ones. but yea, had to be a bitch and point that out. other than that, it's golden.

oh, bad mizuki, go away! nice conflict. nice reunion as well. ^.^ yay for reunions!

another good chapter. i feel like a broken record, all praise and no con-crit, but what is left to say? i couldn't figure out a way to improve this if you gave me a good solid month in which to do it. so... props? i guess that's all i have left to say.

sad! insanely, cutely (...cutely? god, i'm slipping), very-much-so sad! do i need to reiterate why i love it? also, the last couple sentences from iruka's p.o.v. were spectacular.

this was super-duper insanely cute and made even hard-ass me smile. so props. i liked the fact that you had both points of view. sometimes i hate it when people do that, but here it worked very well. so more props for you. ^.^

This story made me unbelievably happy. :) Very inspiring. x SR

This story is so good.It's really nice and yet it had it's sad moments but then again it shined.Awesome story one of the best I have read about IrukaxKakashi.Keep up the good work