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| KitaraStrife 2007-08-30 ch 3,  | abuseO.O DANG! o.o ME LIKEY THIS FICCY! |
| Kirara 2006-08-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseI'm sorry if anyone likes these OCs but being realistic I think the REAL Pilots would have beaten them to the ground and killed them. They were just too skilled to make it seem plausible. If the OCs had sustained a decent amount of damage in that battle it would have been much more realistic. The G-boys fought in a real death dealing war and have years of experience in proper battles, no amount of training can compete with real battle experience. The OCs don't have years of real mobile suit battles under their belts, as they didn't take an active role in the war as Gundam Pilots. Both common sense and simple research can show you this. I know that I am being very critical but this story has the beginnings of something very good. Please make the OCs less like domineering mary-sues! |
| Thursday's Dove 2005-10-12 ch 3, | abuseOh that silly Wufei and his "I'm weak" nonsense! That boy needs to be slapped. Oh wait! Duo DID slap him! ^^;; As always, I've enjoyed what you've written. More soon! |
| Thursday's Dove 2005-09-25 ch 2, | abuseDidn't take long for them to destroy their Gundams, did it? LOL. Great second chapter! What's the dark blue Gundam's name stand for? It was PC. I can't wait for the third! I love having tough chicks in stories! |
| Thursday's Dove 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseoh!! I'm adding this to my favorites and alert list. I like it A LOT!! Very good! Please write more (if you intend on doing so, that is). ^-^ |