*chokes*... bleh! anyways. EW, humorous, yes, gross, yes, well written yes, but... tht has GOT to be one of the strangest couples i have heard of fr AF... bleh. i will not deny i do not like the idea, but it was well written nevertheless so i shall have that compensate about... 20% of the EW-NESS. :) and then. FOALYxMULCH?!?!?!?!?!?! *SCREAMS BLOODY MURDER* lolz, jk, but still, *gasp*. :D haha, keep on writin though, i like how your ideas are well written and... uh... let's say. original :D

Okay... The thought of HollyMulch was decent... But you just obliterated it with this story...

I've already screamed, no really, woke my brother up and everything, but apart from that it was good!

WOW, thats all I can say. This is completely funny and gross at the same time:) cheers

I like it!

SCARY!SCARY!SCARY!{COMMITS SUCIDE IN 1 SCEOND}

Sorry, as I read towards the end my stomach just lurched, and I was forced to run for the bathroom. I like the way it's written, I like how you represented the characters, but HollyxMulch
-swallows spew-

I would like to see more of this story. I find it very humorous.

ROFLMAO!! Brilliant. Very original, and very unorthodox. I would never, ever do this, but definite kudos to you for risking it, and pulling it off PERFECTLY.

Well done, very good, awesome, et al.

Although I was never a MulchxHolly fan, this one was really great. Wow.
FoalyxMULCH?!! NO. WAY. NO. WAY!

I swear I was going to scream. That was absolutely... Oh my... jeez. Erk. Ugh. *choke* But it was really well written, I can admit that, even if I didn't like the pairing you chose.

MY GOD! FIANLY! SOMEONE WHO SUPORTS H/M FICS LIKE ME! pleese update soon!

-pepper

Hehe. This was really good.

righht...um...it was good if you like that sort of thing...i hate slash but holly/mulch is...interesting...i wouldn't hate reading more h/m like i hate holly/trouble (see a twist of fate, no offense to the author it was a good story but i hate character death and holly/trouble is too...too...um...messed up anyway...) but i still prefer arty/holly and i will prefer that to the end of time! muahaha! (or until i stop liking AF...like that will ever happen...)

Okay...
0.o
That was funny. And strange. You could improve it by making it longer, but I don't think anyone would like to see a long Mulch\Holly Romeo\Julliet thing. The short version takes enough years of my life...
4/5, funny story.

*screams*
Mulch/absolutely anyone at all is extremely terrifying. Particularly Foaly. Poor Foaly. Poor Holly. Oh well, what's a fanfic for if not writing stuff the author would've written?
Love the style of writing! very funny