This was wonderful. I twas well written with little typos. Typos are a part of life so they really mean little. It was very nice and I really enjoyed it.

Loved it. Great fic. =]

Very well done... Simply so well written and the turn of phrase was wonderful.

WELL DONE.

Okay, that was really cool. Too bad that wasn't a scene from the movie. I love all the Sue/Reed stuff. Very cute.

Nice descrpition of the movie scenes there, very impressive indeed (though I was a bit disappointed when you didn't include the scene were DR. Doom bent Reed's finger back a little too far. That was curel-cool). Espically with Reed's thoughts, I loved how you described his wavering strength and "thready" state of mind before Sue and Ben came to the rescue. The "fanfiction" part of the story (via after Ben and Doom fell out of the building) was nicely written as well: I loved the Reed/Sue itneraction, espically when they didn't kiss and got back to the matter at hand. Very realistic. All in all I enjoyed this story.

Good one.
Sakura123

Tee hee! :clap Clap clap clap: I was wondering what happened between the two when Ben and Victor went off fighting...this is really good! >.

Fanfastic! It was a great story and I wish I could write like that! You have real talent. I love your stories! Thankz

Oh my gosh! I Love (with a captial 'L' mind you) your Sue/Reed stories, please write more! None of the others can even match the greatness that are yours! :D

I liked the incorporation of movie and original scenes. Good job. :)

Awesome story, just keep working on it and when it comes out in bookstores i'll buy it

I liked how you showed Reed and Sue's thoughts while Reed was being frozen and unfrozen by the liquid nitrogen. I especially like how you had them admit their feelings for each other.

I loved it! I'm going to add this to my C2 aRCHIVE. ;)

This was fantastic. I really like how you describe Reed's emotions and the way you write. It is awesome. :)
And I liked that deleted scene. Too bad it wasn't on the movie.

You know I love your Sue and Reed fics! Thumbs up for them!
Can't wait to read more :)

I liked this. A good look at Reed and Sue during the movie.