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Reviews For: Bear Trap

MLS1984
2005-10-25
ch 2,
abuseI like your story a lot. I especially like that someone's doing a DavidGreenlee thing. David's so underrated. I like him. :D Keep up the good work.
Missy Jade
2005-09-20
ch 2,
abuse"And despite denying his feelings-telling himself he would not love, he would not feel-he'd felt the punch in the gut when he heard she'd married the sonuvabitch."

spoke volumes for me... short are okay as long as we get a lot of them, okay?! this is a great fic and i want you to keep this going!
Lynn
2005-09-20
ch 2, anon.
abuseWoohoo. Go David go.
PumpkinMush
2005-09-20
ch 1,
abuseThanks guys!:) It's going to get more angsty now as we go deeper into fanfic land:). I'll update when I can, but certain other D/G writers must update soon, too! ;) (nudge nudge)
dre10115
2005-09-20
ch 2,
abusethat was great!! i like how you include there quotes !! please update soon!
LuvDave
2005-09-19
ch 1,
abuseI love first person fanfic stories, because we know what the characters are thinking and feeling in much greater detail than we could ever see on the screen, which in D/G's case is pure heaven! I can't wait for the next chapter in their lives by your creative hand, because I think it'll be the beginning of forever! :)
Lynn
2005-09-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like it. Nice and angsty with a little bit of hope. Very David and Greenlee.
Missy Jade
2005-09-18
ch 1,
abuseyay! so far it's well-written and perfectly characterized! it's on my fave list! update soon!
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