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| MLS1984 2005-10-25 ch 2, | abuseI like your story a lot. I especially like that someone's doing a DavidGreenlee thing. David's so underrated. I like him. :D Keep up the good work. |
| Missy Jade 2005-09-20 ch 2, | abuse"And despite denying his feelings-telling himself he would not love, he would not feel-he'd felt the punch in the gut when he heard she'd married the sonuvabitch." spoke volumes for me... short are okay as long as we get a lot of them, okay?! this is a great fic and i want you to keep this going! |
| Lynn 2005-09-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseWoohoo. Go David go. |
| PumpkinMush 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseThanks guys!:) It's going to get more angsty now as we go deeper into fanfic land:). I'll update when I can, but certain other D/G writers must update soon, too! ;) (nudge nudge) |
| dre10115 2005-09-20 ch 2, | abusethat was great!! i like how you include there quotes !! please update soon! |
| LuvDave 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abuseI love first person fanfic stories, because we know what the characters are thinking and feeling in much greater detail than we could ever see on the screen, which in D/G's case is pure heaven! I can't wait for the next chapter in their lives by your creative hand, because I think it'll be the beginning of forever! :) |
| Lynn 2005-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it. Nice and angsty with a little bit of hope. Very David and Greenlee. |
| Missy Jade 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseyay! so far it's well-written and perfectly characterized! it's on my fave list! update soon! |