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Beth Pryor
2005-11-15
ch 4,
abuseThis was a really interesting perspective and great way to end the series. I do disagree with you in one aspect, though. I don't think that Beth would have been so critical of Meg when she came home. Sure, Meg upset everyone and the family disowned her, but Beth went through the exact same thing when she decided to keep her baby. I think she would have been a little more understanding.
Lunatic Lorenzio
2005-09-18
ch 4,
abusealthough im a chris fan, and havent actually seen all of season three but i thought you handled this really well. i really thought that this was an excellent story and that all the pain was handled really well. congrats.
Tessie26
2005-09-18
ch 4,
abuseWow, this was unimaginably great. I've been wishing for a story like this ever since the series ended, and this was an answer to my prayers. You've gotten all the characters down perfectly, and I loved how you changed scenes by the sound of someones voice, as in the show. Most of all, I loved the epilouge at the end, because it showed how each life ended up. This was a great tribute to the show that gave us all the hope that the dream will live forever. I hope you consider writing more American Dreams stories, It'd be a waste not to. I think you'd be particularly goos writing a JJ\Beth story, because you really wrote them well. Truly, thsi gave me a sense of warmth inside, and I no longer have to wonder where the Pryor lives went beyond season three.
Thank You.
-Tessie:)
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