Reviews for Eight Years Time

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Kristal 2008-04-04 ch 18,	abuseYay you did update! And what a lovely update at that- a cliff hanger and all included! So with a nice cliffy with Rose dangling on the end of it, I must say that you have a need to update and enlighten us with what comes next. Sadly, I see, you haven't gotten any other reviews for this chapter- hum, some people are obviously missing out or playing the lets-not-review-card that I am so often playing. Well anyway, I'm sorry for the delay in reviewing- I was on vacation and travelling around the UK! Hoping you will continue ASAP, Kristal WRITE NOW!
Kristal 2008-03-01 ch 17,	abuseAfter reading this all for the last few hours, I needed to break my long standing of not reviewing fics... I know, I'm one of those horrible readers who doesn't often review fics (mostly because I can't get through many stories without boring, etc- somehow so many of the greatest fanfic writers (and/or fanfic stories) have been completed or set aside years ago. And now with a strong sense of hope, I'm going to review this and beg for another chapter. This is a lovely story- so unlike many the Doctor and Rose have a child fic. Lovely, angsty, and downright fantastic! Now I do realize that this story hasn't been updated since 2006- its a long shot for me to review and hope for a new chapter. However, because I saw that you have had recent stories- I have the right to hope that you will continue this. And right now you're probably sad that you will have to reply back to this poor and lowly reviewer and say, please forgive me but this story is permenantely incomplete because you have lost your muse, bla bla wof wof. I know its hard to find a muse again- but with such a lovely story, its bound to hop around at some point or if need be, to go search for it again). The actual story- The entire story and plot are amazing! I've been trying to find a story where Rose lost her memories. This being because I had the urge to write something with this but just have so little time and am trying to write a few other pieces already. But anyway, its a lost memory fic, a child fic, and a Jack fic. Its amazing! I have to say I was hopeful with thinking maybe, just maybe Kelan was the Doctor's- but alas, I think it turned out better that he wasn't. In fact, being an angsty lover- I had to say that it would be great to see what would happen if Rose was taken away. Of course, the shipper in me hopes otherwise and wishes for the angsty but, of course, romantic happy ending! Hum, if you do continue this- how fun it would be for a pick-your-own ending style! How I wish I had the time to create an entire pcik-your-own-adventure fanfic. How ace would that be? For extra bonus, I want to add that you write the children perfectly! Both are actual real children actually acting like real children! Remarkable how that works! But seriously folks, I was definitely pleased to see that they aren't all knowing and strong and can take on the world. You kept them real. Good job! Also want to add my favorite line so far (if I had to pick only oen): He almost resisted taking the boy, as dark jealousy rose in him. As forementioned, I love well written angst! And reading this just made me go AW! BAD DOCTOR! But of course the angsty lover was saying- yes, leave him so I can read what Rose will do to you or see how much guilt and self-hate you have toward yourself if Rose is taken or killed or worse if you had to admit you had just left the boy. Tsk tsk. But still- dark jealousy, oh yes! Onto the happy- I love it. This story is amazing. You're amazing. Therefore, you should add more to this amazing story! Continue ASAP Laterz, Kristal WRITE NOW! (By the way, as mentioned earlier, I rarely leave reviews. Can you see now why this may be?)
Hibby 2008-02-10 ch 17, anon.	abuseThis story has always been one of my favourite in the DW fandom since it was published. I still hope that you'll decide to continue it someday, even after so much time. :) What can I say, I'm an optimist!
Protector of the Gray Fortr... 2008-01-04 ch 17,	abuseThis is very good. Please keep going.
TardisIsTheOnlyWayToTravel 2007-08-28 ch 17,	abuseMore! I can't wait to see the Doctor kick **!
FlyingBass 2006-11-16 ch 17, anon.	abuseAwesome as always! I wish I could be more usual in my comment but as I'm only a reader and not a writer, I'm not very good at critics. The suspence is killing me! More soon please? puppy eyes
gaiafreedom21 2006-11-01 ch 17,	abusegreat fic! don't stop there please?
timano 2006-08-27 ch 17,	abuseThis is a fabulous story! 12 out of 10! (pause) Um, you're not stopping there, are you? What happens now? I only recently came across this story, as I was minus Internet for quite awhile, and I want to know what's going to happen!
Purple Hibiscus 2006-08-05 ch 17, anon.	abuseI've just reread the entire story. I can't beleive I didn't commented before. I'm not a writer and can't give you good critics. All I can say is that I really enjoyed the story so far. I spotted one small thing that seem odd to me, Wasn't Falladanu's skin green in the earlier chapters? Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
Fennelwink 2006-06-11 ch 17, anon.	abuseFound and read your story all in one sitting. I have to say I'm pleasantly surprised. It's far more rich and well developed than I initially predicted by reading the summery. You've created a complex, prickly situation for all those involved. I look forward to seeing it resolved. You've shown wonderful maturity in the characters so far, and I'm sure it will get even better. I'm eager to see Rose change and develop as more of her memories return. It's lovely to see her looking for her place in the world. And even more so, seeing it come at a realistic pace. Can't wait to read more, good job!
Jane 2006-06-09 ch 17, anon.	abuseBrilliant. As Always.
Webmistress Eh? 2006-06-09 ch 17, anon.	abuseYay, you updated. Poor Beth and Rose. I think this is going to be a very traumatic experience for the two of them. Rose is armed now, which I think makes her very dangerous. I'm curious to see when she'll make her move. Can't wait for the next part. Please update soon! :)
Kate 2006-06-09 ch 17, anon.	abuseI am sending you a review so that you write more, because this is a very suspenseful story. I am so glad the Doctor and Kelan are bonding. And I cannot wait to see the fury of a revengeful Time Lord rain down on Slade!
angelic-ninja 2006-06-09 ch 17,	abuseOoh, sneaky. Another fantastic chapter. Looking forward to more soon.
Tai Greywing 2006-06-08 ch 17,	abuseHey there, just found your fic. This is ...considerably different to most of everything else I've read. To be honest, the beginning with the whole 'Rose is dead, her daughter has been living on the TARDIS' didn't really take my fancy. But I perservered reading the rest because I really like your style: you're a great writer. And now, at this point, I really don't know what I was even thinking about complaining about. This is... fast-paced, full of action, realistic characterisation and great original characters with backstories of their own. You probably don't need to hear me say it; but this story is definitely in a higher class. At least a nine out of ten, probably more but I'm hedging my bets that you'll improve (hard as that might be) before this is finished. I truly hope I'm adding to your urge to update, coz I am reviewing: I know how much silence can hurt. Anyhue...update soon, y'hear? Tai

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