 Griffin Raven 2009-12-04 . chapter 29Personally I don't think any of Harry's friends would be to concerned that Severus killed Jason McCullen, especially after what he did to Harry and threatened to do to Draco as well. Some of them might have been angry that they weren't involved in getting revenge upon Jason. I do think that Remus would have loved to "play" with Jason on the full moon, don't you. |
 Griffin Raven 2009-12-04 . chapter 28Wow, what an emotionally powerful roller-coaster of a ride this story is...and I'm enjoying every chapter of it to. I plan to go and an read the uncensored version as well.
I think that Severus, Draco and Hermione could offer better help and support to young Harry. Also Dumbledore never even considered asking Harry if he even wanted to go to the Dursleys to recover from what Jason McCullen did to him. I don't think that Harry will be very happy if/and when he learns that Dumbledore told the Dursleys what happened to him. Despite her grief over Ron's death Hermione is providing loving unconditional support to Draco. Though I think that Draco should tell her what happened to him and about his telepathic ability, as it might help them grieve together. Why was Harry able to contact Severus telepathically...could they be soul mates? |
 Chiku 2009-11-03 . chapter 32 loved it! |
 Hedwigismyowl 2009-08-29 . chapter 32I truly enjoyed this fic. It's not the type of fic I usually read, but I thought, let me read the first chapter and see what it's all about...and I totally got sucked in. Great Job! |
 Jamie Edwards 2009-08-15 . chapter 19I think I prefer your Blaise to the one in the book. Yours DOES something. The one in the book is just a... Not even really a side character. :) |
 Jamie Edwards 2009-08-14 . chapter 9Dismemberment Curse? I wish that you had gone into some detail on what the curse did, because from what was written, I still don't understand. |
 love.for.a.lifetime 2009-07-03 . chapter 32aw that was so adorably sweet. i may not like snape all that much but he really needed somebody to love. and thank god severus didnt kill Blaise or harry wouldnt have his daughter! |
 trollen 2009-05-27 . chapter 32A very good story, i laught some and cryed some. |
 AdamTheAnt 2009-04-02 . chapter 32Ow! It was so great! I nearly cried when I came to the last chapter so much I loved your fic!
But I was kind of disapointed when you didn't finish some loose end like what happened to Mike? Lupin? You should write a last chapter like 5 years later or something, and explain what happened to people. If Dumbledore (I wanted to bash him during your fic) apologies. And what happen to Harry after all of that. I was a bit disapointed about the baby, i didn't find it really revelent, it wasn't essential (from my point of view!) I don't want to be mean, but I simply review your fic which was probably the bet I ever read, even if some questions are unanswered! All right, I better go! Thanks for this wonderful peace of art! ^^ |
 Wafflansypus 2009-03-07 . chapter 32well first off I wanted to say what an amzing story this was! I was on the edge of my seat practically the whole time and when I finished reading it was rather surreal because I just couldn't imagine it ending after being so involved in it. you portrayed the characters beautifully and your plot was amazing, to say the least. hats off to you for a fic well done.
Waffles |
 Anne399 2009-01-28 . chapter 32Loved the story! |
 CrowNoYami 2008-10-25 . chapter 32Oh My Gods! I never finished this fic before, having stopped after getting distracted by something but now I don't know how I lived with not knowing how it all ended. There were times when tears left my eyes and times when I couldn't stop laughing, even times when I felt so angry that I thought my anger could actually be felt through the screen.
You brought out so many emotions and even managed to make the Dursleys "good" for lack of a better word without changing much at all. The way that you made this revolve around Severus and how much love he feels for Harry makes me bow to your skills as an author.
With much love and thanks,
Mari-chan
p.s. I haven't stopped reading this story since I started yesterday... it's now 5am so I'm going to get some sleep now... Goodnight... or Morning... whatever... |
 LoireLoa 2008-09-17 . chapter 32I loved this story! |
 Truth seer 2008-09-02 . chapter 32that was a good one. Do you have any other stories? |
 Lilia0 2008-07-25 . chapter 1Wow, that's...different. But it's a good different, I like it!
Lilia, the uke rapist. |