well written ... really good stuff, I liked it a lot

Uh... how very sweet :P I just liked it

O a look at the Death Eaters side of it all. I love stories where you see it from the "bad guy's" point of view. Makes you think. I love how you make Cissy so motherly.

Defy Gravity

Wow. What a brilliant, original idea. Lovely writing, too; really skillful use of rhythm and repetition. Loved it.

incredibly good. Gave me chills.

this was cool

YES! FINALLY A GOOD SNAPE/NARCISSA! omg I love you! I was begining to think that no one could write this how it deserves. Thank god.
-lain

wow! that was great! it seems perfect in discription for her pain. the pain fro Draco adn Narcissa...its great!

aww that's so good. i feel so bad for narcissa..i did during hbp too because it IS her only son out there.

Wow, Ed. You never cease to amaze me. But did you really hafta keel off BOTH the Malfoy hotties? ;) Poor Cissy. :(

So.. sad...

Really good, though.

The only part I didn't like was the present tense narration, but it definitely was the best choice for the story. It's a pet peeve of mine. ^_^

-Stars

Oh shivers, very touching... I thougth you were talking about Ron there for a moment... ;) But I have regained my sanity, and must ask... Did Malfoy die? When did that happen? Oh well doesn't matter, like always great story!