I started to read this story a few days ago and I did not want to review until I had finished it. I really like what you have done with the plotline here. And I agree that the Ministry of Magic would have taken over the Order of the Phoenix and use it as a mere pawn. Well, I have nothing else to say other then a job well done.

Update soon!

Darkbusterrancher

Boy, are you mean. Every step forward by the good guys seems to be countered by several steps back.

You were mean to Luna. I hate you.

This is a very exciting story. Why do I get the feeling that Ginny will pull a Wormtail, and eventually betray Harry?

I like your Luna. Harry's got the right blend of depression and heroism. Ron and Hermione seem OK. I like Sarah. Good OC. I don't see her calling Harry "daddy" though, even though he adopted her.

One problem I have with the plot is the Auror White being left working - Even if Umbridge didn't let the first message through, I don't see Moody giving up.

But a good story. I wait expectantly for further chapters.

Thank you for sharing your skill and imagination with us.

Tom A.

Wow..

bloody amazing.

You better make Hermione and Ginny get well! :P

Keep writing, mate.

After this story is completed you should seriously consider a career as an author.

I love your story. I think most of your ideas are quiet imagenable how the last year could go on. I liked the items you imagened, like the Order rings or the Marauders log. I also liked that there is a great suspense in your story. But I have to say that there are some things that are improbable. For example, I just cant imagine Harry, Ron and Hermione meditating for learning Occlumency and I think Rowling wouldnt put in all those offensive comments and acts of Tonks, because its still a book for childrean. Anyway, your story is really great and I cant wait to read the next update and I really hope the whole thing will have a good end.

(Sorry if there are a few gramatical faults or wrong word in my comment, my English is ok, but not perfect:-)

Hey, even though your story is nice, I think there is a lot more romance and pranks than Rowling would put in. Also, you don't seem to spend more time training the order of light. Try some training instead of romance and pranks, then maybe Harry and his friends would win.

Great chapter, can't wait to see what this memory is about.

Your story is definitely one of the best fanfics I've ever read not just in but in the whole web. It's captured the true spirit of a Harry Potter story, especially one concerning his last and darkest year in Hogwarts. I'm excited to hear what Grindelwald has to say to him. Please update soon.

Great chapter. I really hope Harry and Ginny split up. There really doesn't seem to be any real emotional connection between them aside from negative ones and a friendship, but Ginny just keeps pissing him off with her immaturity. He's way past the rest of the group, except perhaps Luna with her unique perspective.

that was certainly an interesting chapter.

What's up with Harry & Ginny? I'm not following their problems.

Luna losing it was a little unexpected because she let's those types of things roll right off of her.

I liked the action in the chapter.

A Dumbledore pensieve scene...well you have lots of room to play with that idea. (an original twist to the idea of help from a deceased mentor)

In this chapter, you start a paragraph like this:

The second floor bathroom door opened up and Susan excited wearing a bathroom.

What sort of bathroom? I believe you have several misspellings here, and that one caught my attention. I really think you should proofread before you submit.

Otherwise, the story is good.

i love it!

KEEP UPDATING!

Hey,

Sorry if you have answered my questions in a previous chapter, but I'm confused about a couple of things in this chapter: what exactly is it that Pansy accused Luna of doing? I didn't get that. And why is Luna angry with Harry? Because she couldn't participate in their last fight against the Death Eaters at the church? And Harry's lists, I think, are brilliant!

WHOA! crazy! thats awesome. cant wait to hear about this memory. a good place to stop too.

nevermore eh? ahh i havent read fics in a bit. im not gunna bother reviewin cause i cant remember whats happened in the past few HP books :D your good writer, just a couple spelling mistakes here and there. You have ALOT happening at once. Im surprised your keeping it all together, but its pretty good. May want to stretch some of this out a bit. It gets a bit confusing here and there, maybe its just me :D always was a bit slow. Your one of the few people actually writing a good post HBP fic, :-) thanks! Good fic, i hate your chapter endings, theyre always a clify. You make every good guy seem weak in this. The 'bad guys' seem overly powerful. Not bad, but this is just odd compared t' most fics ive read. Hope to see an update-

An excellent, and much longer, chapter! I'm curious as to what Ginny saw; I assumed she'd tell Harry by the end of the chapter, but I guess we'll wait. I'm guessing some guy tried to rape her or something along those lines; maybe an ex-boyfriend. And we still don't know what she gave Harry for his birthday!

One of my favorite things about your writing is you don't just focus on Harry and Ginny; Hermoine and Luna were focused on this chapter, and Justin made an appearance, and may come back. But you left us on a cliffy once again; I want to see Dumbledore's memory!