I'll say it up front--this fic right here is the first slash fic I have ever read and honestly enjoyed, because I find it so completely IC. I am of the opinion that Sands is bisexual, so this worked perfectly for me--him using sex almost like a weapon is perfect. The willingness to do anything to have the upper hand. Plus, it was not too explicit, nor was it too vague. It was just perfect. Your grammar is excellent, your spelling is excellent, your puncuation is excellent. Errors were few and far between--I only caught a couple after thorough scanning and several readings.

Awesome, awesome fic.

Wow I really loved the ending. Once again you have created a perfect fic!

Wow, Sands is singing again. I could only hope that Sands now heads down into Mariachi territory and things get kicked up a notch. I didn't know Jorge had it in him(forgive the pun). Love Sands. Love the power, the strength of the personality and the physicallity, just love Sands. Thank you for writing this little gem.

aah Miss Becky it's wonderful to see you back in this forum i do hope you stick with us for a while. i love your work and this is no different! I loved this especially the ending, very sands. well done.

Oh, Miss Becky, it's been too long :)

"Sands would not shut up."
What a classic first line! ;D

"But Sands – the greedy bastard – always wanted more."
Tut tut tut.

"Time for Ramirez to reclaim his quiet house and his solitude."
Good luck Jorge, you're gonna need it ;)

"To his horror, Ramirez realized that Sands was afraid to leave."
As sympathetic as that makes me, I can also sympathise with Ramirez...I don't think I could take Sands for longer than a few days, maybe not even that ;P

"Nothing, except one hell of a shock."
Not sure I like the sound of that.

"He captured Sands’ lips, bruising, punishing the mouth that never seemed to stop talking."
Well, that certainly would be my method of choice ;)

“Well, if that wasn’t inter-agency cooperation, I don’t know what was.”
Hahahah...indeed.

"The fingers were all curled under, except the middle one, which stood up in a proud **-you."
Ah, so fitting.

Thanks Miss B, you're such a fanfic star :D

While I am not a huge fan of slash, when it's done well, it's a delight - and this was definitely a delight (and to be perfectly honest, with a guy like Sands who's to say which way he swings... )

Very enjoyable.

Cheers,
Helen

Aw, vow!
I have waited for your new walk in Mexico a long time and it was VERY worth the wait. Love this. Sands is so ... Sands that it is remarkable. You have made really made him one of your very true characters and it is so good to see him again (pun, intended.) Just VOW!

Holy god.

Ok, so you know me...not a huge fan of slash, probably since I haven't read much that was very good, but this one...Um. Well. Wow. I don't think I should, just for my own personal idiom, (as Lancelot would say) comment too much more except to say that I am extremely surprised that I, uh, ENJOYED the fic as much as I did. *giggles* Ok, just email me later.

Yay! Scary!Sands is even better than bitter!Sands. Much better, if only slightly more dangerous. Love this, love you, want more.

Loved this Miss Becky, thank you for writing another incredible story. I haven't read Sands in awhile and you made me realize and remember what I've been missing.

Hey, Miss Becky's back! Glad to see you and your story.

Very interesting. I'd never imagined this pair together, but now . . . I can kind of see it. Good work for a one-shot, or is this to be continued? Well, regardless, thanks for the story :D

Ash