Whoa! That was a plot twist I never saw coming! Awesome job!

GAH! Finally, an evil mouse! It's always just vermin and the occasional vole! SHOW US SOME BADASS MICE! Great fic. faved!

That little lier! Fenald should get caught! Nice story though.

Wow.. its just like Redwallers to suspect the innocent fox of murder...

SO Fenald did it! I hope justice is served! I knew it wasn't the fox right away.

Good twist but that isn't realistic enough said good story though

o *shudder* creepy. good writing, I never suspected him!

I feel like I'm playing "Clue, Redwall edition"

this chapter was so cool, it makes me want to do this...sorry i dont update much. scool sux, but i wish i could write more, im acually giong to post soon1 great shot!

grubswiper~

Interesting, like the somewhat subversive feel this seems to have. Complements a coupld of stories that have been written as well...I kind of question the Infirmary Keeper's actions a bit...seems a bit odd after all, but what I really wonder about is the nature of this. Is this a one shot or part of a larger work? As it stands this really could be one or the other and I think it would be very interesting to have the warrior be found out. Anyways, nice job here.

~avel

Oh, devious! Well played out -- and believable, unlike many fics I've seen as of late. Excelent work!

O.o.
Wow, nice twist! That was really cool! so is this ashort story or are you continuing it? i thought it would be the gatekeeper. And on this account, why did you delete Shadows in the dark-I'd read some of the first chapter and I was going to read moree, but it was deleted! Anyways, nice story.