 Kaira-chan15 2007-12-02 . chapter 3Oh no, Zhou has Katara and Aang! I can't wait to see what happens next! :D Oh, and I liked this line:
His ally turned to him, “Oh, you have no hope if you’re being helped by Zac,” he said, and slipped off his mask, “but you have plenty if you’re being aided by Zuko.” |
 Kaira-chan15 2007-12-02 . chapter 2Lol Aang kicked Zhou in his "happy place" hehe. :P Nice chapter! |
 Kaira-chan15 2007-12-02 . chapter 1Interesting idea so far, I liked it. Ooh a cliffy! :P |
 silver 2006-02-15 . chapter 1 o come on no pairings!! well the summery sounds great but it would be better if it was a zutara! |
 Dark Damsel 2006-02-03 . chapter 3Please continue this story too! It is SO good. Really awesome! |
 Haleigh H. 2005-12-28 . chapter 3 Zuko is not very in character,but that's a good thing. He and Sauka seemed to really connect over the whole'a sycho is interested in my sister' thing. Jet is really upsessed with Katara, that's true. Poor girl. Write more soon! |
 jalapeno1011 2005-11-11 . chapter 3omg that so rocks plz plz plz update soon |
 Shadowlover101 2005-10-11 . chapter 3Wow, cool! That chapter ending was really cool. I can't wait to read more! Please update soon. |
 Purple MoonShine 2005-09-23 . chapter 3 I love this fic . please continue,why this sounds like it can be a episode. Besides a good return of the blue spirit costume. Zhaou would put up wanted posters saying that. if it was me iwould put whatever blue in japense and Oni on the wanted posters. Oh well Zhaou is a arrogent idiot |
 APpaRox 2005-09-23 . chapter 2 cool. I'm reading on. |
 Me 2005-09-19 . chapter 2 What follows is etirely my opinion as a reader and starting (as in starting to write my own stories - my school writing level is high school) writer. Good idea - the summary pulled me in - but the excecution of it could be better. You know, more detail, dialogue could use tweeking, and a little backstory to clear up some inconsistency (how did Jet get near the trio, how did Zuko find them, and how did Zhao end up there, etc.) But like I said - good idea and that's what counts! |
 ShadowHawk360 2005-09-19 . chapter 2This is a good story i think yuo mih want to change the tile though it was a good summery but that title was kinda how shal i put is grose ok |
 x0xtennisfanx0x 2005-09-19 . chapter 2I KNOW! DO SOMETHING WITH JET AND KATARA! AND DO A AANG AND JET BATTLE SCEAN! |
 Suave Boogie 2005-09-19 . chapter 2Good idea, I just have a few questions. What was Zhao doing there? Is he in league with Jet's gang?
Like I said, good story, I like friendship fics. Sometimes Zuko seemed a little out of character, he's a pretty reserved person. Sometimes it seemed like you rushed the story a bit, where you could've added a little detail. Then again I know you were wanting to get to the meaty stuff, that being Sokka and Zuko's comradeship.
All in all, this looks promising and has a cute, unique little idea. I like it. |
 airnomadperson 2005-09-18 . chapter 1 You must continue. The Blue Spirit was my FAVORITE eppie and Zuko is my FAVORITE character. I shall be waiting for a number two^^ |