No one can take their home from them, it's true; and those who try are met with a rather ** off Cap'n Luffy.

So good! I love the ending! No their not perfect at all, but their still great together aren't they? Amazing one-shot! This sounds like Nami's thinking, and I agreed with everything. Especially "Luffy had a magnetic air around him" That seems so true! Everything you said about Luffy was perfect.

Oh, about the name thing--TOTALLY agree. I think the manga corrects that later on, but seriously, Ruffie? That makes him seem like some kind of dog!! And Zolo? That just sounds like a candy.

Anyway, I really enjoyed it, because I hardly get to read One Piece stories because--I'm too busy focusing on Naruto ^_^ even though this is my second favorite anime.

Even though I like the new additions--Chopper, Robin, Franky, and Brooke, this is (to me) the main group. They seemed oddly complete with just the four of them, but you obviously couldn't run a ship with simply four people, so more had to be added.

So, I really liked it, luved how you brought out their faults and strengths while showing how amazing they are and uh, yeah! Great job!

Wonderful!
nothing else I can say but extremely well done again thank you.
Larry.

Note: Merry Go is the name of the ship in the Manga the Going Merry is the Anime's name.

AW! This is SO AWESOME!

That was so awesome! You did a great job. This is a fave. Bai-Bai!

Very nice. please continue to write> my comp screwin up on my so
L8er
BlackRoseFire

This was pretty good, although if you have kept up to the manga or anime (the japanese) its very far ahead of this, but looking at the time this was written, i say it was pretty right on. Well still waiting for the update on For the love of my friends, from Naruto. PLEASE UPDATE! :)

i like it
but as a note the ship is called Going Merry
not Merry Go

"This is our home."

Such a true statement, and one can easily follow Nami's thoughts as she tries to make sense of where life has led her.

Love it. And if you have more one-shots to share, please do. Love your writing.

nice! loved it!

A masterpiece of a one-shot...

wow, almost as good as ur Naruto fic.
^_^ me like!

Awe, now that is really cute. I love it! Oh man, I cannot draw a stick figure to save my life!

That was awesome. Wonderful characterization of Nami. I lost track of what episode I was at, and I haven't read the manga, but...wow. That was just so purely Nami, and she totally kicks butt, as does your story! She is, by far my favorite. The spelling doesn't matter, I know who they are, and as I said before I haven't read the manga so it makes no difference to me. You really did a good job of combining stream of conscious with dialogue, something that is hard to do and is a major hit-or-miss concept. You were right on target there, my friend!
Awesomely awesome and spectacularly specatcular.
Many kudos..
Roaine