|Reviews for A Very Short Trip|
| authority02 3/17/11 . chapter 1
But the mirror would actually be granting his wish, because everyone would realise how close they were to losing him and they would treat him better as a result. Also, he would probably start to miss everyone if he went somewhere else, so actually this was the only way to fulfil the wish properly. Heh.
| Fastidious 2/14/11 . chapter 1
Oooh, tricky .-
| chronodekar 11/1/10 . chapter 1
Depending on your point of view, this COULD be agnst/humor. I'm feeling a bit twisted right now, and well, can't decide which it could be.
Still, an interesting spamfic loosly based on the Nabam (?) mirror. Hmm... perhaps I should search for more of these fics?
| Demon Lord of Blood 5/1/09 . chapter 1
hmm so whos the matchup with
| paula tobor 12/28/07 . chapter 1
thanks for posting this anyway, not all great stories are multi-volume epics. there is a short called "scenes from a life"
set in the oh my goddess world that is a classic.
| loaned 8/24/07 . chapter 1
. Nice little wisdom imparted there.
| Rose1948 7/6/07 . chapter 1
"It wasn’t the mirror’s fault that that place was closer than he would have ever imagined."
This little story both begs for a continuance and stands very competently on it's own.
| Mr. Thumbsup 5/19/07 . chapter 1
| krizue 1/2/07 . chapter 1
| Yo 7/6/06 . chapter 1
Only for what this is, it is a nice combination of vagueness and hard events. I just wish you add a hint of who the person is - though that was the point... Keep it up!
| Talah 2/22/06 . chapter 1
Nice. Very Nice. Can't go wrong with an Ozzallos fic. Have liked every single one.
| Duke Bonez 1/11/06 . chapter 1
I like the end. You can't cheat your way to perfection. And that's what he was asking a little slice of perfection.
| crystlshake 11/2/05 . chapter 1
This story though short had a lot of impact. The primary one being how it compares to the usual result of a wish granting situation. On an even deeper level in how likely something like this would happen in cannon. Then it adds a nice layer of versatility and could serve as the first chapter to any number of fics depending on how literal the mirror took his wish. One could easily apply its relevance to one of the people on the roof, or someone nearby, or even on the scale of the same world or universe. Additionaly as a more subtle aspect, how the wording of his wish would affect other characters' behavior. The last two concepts can be insinuated by the ambiguous nature of the last line.
| wolf-in-hell 9/30/05 . chapter 1
you are absolutly EVIL, but in a good way.
| A. Terun 9/19/05 . chapter 1
BRILLIANT (no further words needed)